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2023-03-19 02:27

Disappointing, i read all free chapters and i wonder if this is an experiment made by scientist to test what are the limits of what do we willing to endure while reading. Mc is dumb, by this im not saying the normal mc dumb but the infuriating type, he played 10 years of a game with 1/8 time extension wich should at least mean he got few decades of experience and knowledge how things work but he didn't even consider very obvious red flags that shout [Stay away weakling ] he even got a skill that should be a danger perception but no it doesn't even give clues if mc dumb enough to not even think about it. It's not like mc didn't have opportunity's other than that, im sure there was a lot of opportunity's better than the one that screwed him over, i don't rant anymore but the first 55 chapter doesn't worth my time. I don't know what author want to achieve with this but i didn't think it could bring in readers or enhance immersion, the snarky system remarks/sumb choices after another /the lack of consideration even after 6 months (the time mc spent in this world) is the reason i dropped this. The mc do not have any quality so far that interested me to stay for remaining story. And pitting mc against an endgame powerful entity is also very cliche that most likely could only be solved with marry sue plot armor with how dumb mc is.

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EmptyTaoist
EmptyTaoistLv2

I enjoyed the power system and the first few chapters, and many other things but the biggest letdown fot me in this story is the mc and the snarky system.

GoGo
GoGoAuthor

All of that would happen later, as I said before. He was the nonsensical side character. he was not a master class at things. He was someone carried by his brother. In other stories he will be the incapable side character that gets ignored. But his flaws are important part of his psyche. As this is the story about a guy in a nonsensical situation and how he deals with the cards he was dealt with. Without the cheat of multiple lives, standing out has its own consequences. BTW, give it a try. There is a reason for why I introduced it, this in general is not a regular level up NPC story. there is massive power creeps among characters and even enemies. And its more about the world than the MC. It doesn't hurt to read a few more chapters... pretty please.

EmptyTaoist
EmptyTaoistLv2

I read overgeard and dropped it amd finally read it the whole and find the character development very fullfiling but the snarky system remark are very very repulsive for me. I read many novels and all of them with snarky systems was a disappointment and i kinda have prejudice against snarky systems now. But maybe i give it a try later and reread the previous chapters too. Im impressed how much patience you have at writing an annoying side characters as your mc. It must be unique experience rereading your work. I enjoyed almost everything expect the mc in later chapters and the snarky system amd the eldritch possession. The bomb stuff wasn't anything annoying, but the mc lack of foresight and the introduction of other people who got isekaid feelt useless to the story at least to me. The power system is interesting, and was mainly the reasons i stayed even though mc choices and bad luck irritated me.

GoGo:All of that would happen later, as I said before. He was the nonsensical side character. he was not a master class at things. He was someone carried by his brother. In other stories he will be the incapable side character that gets ignored. But his flaws are important part of his psyche. As this is the story about a guy in a nonsensical situation and how he deals with the cards he was dealt with. Without the cheat of multiple lives, standing out has its own consequences. BTW, give it a try. There is a reason for why I introduced it, this in general is not a regular level up NPC story. there is massive power creeps among characters and even enemies. And its more about the world than the MC. It doesn't hurt to read a few more chapters... pretty please.
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GoGo
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Hello! The Author of this novel is here. I am rewriting the details here as the last time was written on android and I can't type on it properly. The MC here is not super smart, super strong, super manipulative, or good at virtually everything. He is just an average person who knows how to use common sense and like in life, he experiences failures a lot. But life is about growing and evolving and our MC will do just that. All his bad experiences will make him stronger, all his losses give him more experience and he will grow up to be a monster later. There are also lots of side characters in this novel as MC is not a one-man army, he will slowly create a group of his own because a single person can't do everything on his own. And none of these members are those that worship MC even with his knowledge, instead, they all are part of his group for their reasons. About the story: ARC1 - Mostly introduction and how the world got affected by players and introduction of the organization that will play a part in the power struggle in the future, nothing important besides some introductions. ARC2 - This happened between the five-year interval players disappear for and will have the most growth on MC's front. This arc will tell the tale about MC finding that the world may not be the same as he remembered and some changes have taken place. ARC3 - This will be the player's arrival and probably the arc where MC will leave his base planet and meet the other characters[native/npcs] from other starter planets whose story we have been following since ARC1. And not all of them may be friendly. ARC4 - TBD Just read it guy/buddy/fweand So just some details about the world. The world is divided into three newbie planets each with its Power system. Planet of Prenia is the knight and magic planet. There are two unique paths in this, The knight path which gives you power similar to dragon ball z characters, and the classic magic system. Planet of Taurus is the mutant and externalist planet. There are two unique paths on this one too. The mutant power system uses biomass and genetic mutations to exceed their life limits and reach transcendence while the Externalist uses tools, mech, and advanced weaponry to fight. Planet of Danav is the beast planet. There is only one unique power system on this planet and it's called Shaman or totem warriors. These warriors can control the beast, use beast spirit to enhance themselves, create totems, etc. Besides these 5 power systems, there is a sixth one common on all the planets. And it's called Domain and has a different name on all the planets. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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