if I had to describe this story in one word then it would be CRINGE. the mc is a second rate madara wanna be to the point that Tobi would be better in acting as madara. I don't know how the author did it but he some how make the already existing character's design awful. like bru madara is the living incarnation of pride how in the world would he even say 'is that the battle of gods?" when they are only using fire style and water style jutsu? and Mito loves shun? are you for real? bru they have not even met yet. I suggest you rewatch naruto again heck you should watch boruto while your at it coz you badly need some research man.
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I’m not following Cannon, that’s your problem, all of the unnecessary stuff you just said sounds dumb.
bru I'm not saying you that you follow canon I am saying that you review your character's design and compare it to the characters in naruto that would help your current character design. the world background is good, the storyline is okay, its just your character design is pulling your novel down.
Agreed lol
shin_rae_miu:bru I'm not saying you that you follow canon I am saying that you review your character's design and compare it to the characters in naruto that would help your current character design. the world background is good, the storyline is okay, its just your character design is pulling your novel down.
You're dumb for not understanding what shin said about your character design and saying that all he said was "unnecessary".
Kamery_Driver_1580:I’m not following Cannon, that’s your problem, all of the unnecessary stuff you just said sounds dumb.
another dumb deer. did an elephant step on your head in your childhood!?
Kamery_Driver_1580:I’m not following Cannon, that’s your problem, all of the unnecessary stuff you just said sounds dumb.
Ouch, now everybody is going a bit too far.
A real villain, don't bother with negative comments and remember Fang Yuan's novel, he received many negative comments and even his novel was banned but in the end he achieved a fantastic success despite the haters,
Kamery_Driver_1580:I’m not following Cannon, that’s your problem, all of the unnecessary stuff you just said sounds dumb.
agreed
Daoof30Forced:Agreed lol
The thing I didn’t like was, after he gained power he started becoming arrogant like he owns everything since chap2
well what do you expect from humans. give them a little power and they think they are gods.
Jaziyah:The thing I didn’t like was, after he gained power he started becoming arrogant like he owns everything since chap2
makes no sense. A random modern guy just becomes a killing machine the second he's transferred. he doesn't actually know these uchiha classes to ba angry over their deaths. and he just become another madara and slaughters Everthing in sight like he's use to it. makes no sense
