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HaracasAye
HaracasAyeLv43yr
2022-03-19 22:05

Boring, thats all I can say. The apocalypse is not exciting, its a very bare bones basic, monsters (called demons for some reason) invade earth, kill them for exp and materials, The 'system' is honestly just a status screen if you ignore its ability to upgrade the mcs power. The mc even though he was apparently abused and bullied his whole life is somehow some kind of sociopathic manipulator without any development or explanation. I had to start skimming after ch 20 because I felt like I was wasting my time. The author also has a habit of making his mc speak far too much during fights, just blurting out whats happening to him instead of doing something about it. However, despite all this its still one of the better novels on this site.

Rise Of The Hoarder

Magecrafter
4.3
464 Chs

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Magecrafter
MagecrafterAuthor

Thank you for your honesty review. I'll make sure to take your words to heart and make a better story as it progresses. As for the character's personality, he has always been sociopathic, but lacked the strength to do anything about it. Since you've read it to an extent, you must have seen his fantasies in the past. Also, he spent a great deal of time of watching the events of the world from the Sacred Hall, enjoying everyone suffer. Of course, it slowly morphed how he thought until he became sadistic in nature. Despite all this, he isn't a fully bred villain, and more character developments are underway. Thank you for taking your time to read and review. I promise it only gets better.

3yr
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Andrew_KING
Andrew_KINGLv14

So the mc is a Sadistic Sociopath? Hehe... Good

Magecrafter:Thank you for your honesty review. I'll make sure to take your words to heart and make a better story as it progresses. As for the character's personality, he has always been sociopathic, but lacked the strength to do anything about it. Since you've read it to an extent, you must have seen his fantasies in the past. Also, he spent a great deal of time of watching the events of the world from the Sacred Hall, enjoying everyone suffer. Of course, it slowly morphed how he thought until he became sadistic in nature. Despite all this, he isn't a fully bred villain, and more character developments are underway. Thank you for taking your time to read and review. I promise it only gets better.
2yr
5
Magecrafter
MagecrafterAuthor

Yup Though not always. hehehe

Andrew_KING:So the mc is a Sadistic Sociopath? Hehe... Good
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UncleDodger
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and this is what happen when you give low level noob a high tier weapon

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