Looks good so far, has potential.

Whats the raw name?

This is giving harem vibes and i dont like it.

Author really tried to sell the idea that attaking one point in the aperture walls is some kind of obscure breakthrough technique. Bro cmon. If the clan really was trying to delay rank 2 breakthrough they would just reduce the amount of primeval stones given out.

No, this is the difference between those with and without talent.

Havent heard good things from ppl who have read the raws. Apparently in the future mc does things that are so out of character its like hes a different person. Wonder whats the translators opinion.

Your writing style is great just a shame the gold fingers you create break the lore. It happened in the RI fic and its the same case here. Arguably the most pivotal aspect of danmachi is the symbiosis between mortals and gods and you giving the mc a system just threw that all to the wind. The interactions, characters, scheming thats lost cause the mc doesnt need to join a familia is a far greater loss than the gains of the mc being evil.

Mc has as much plot armour as the protagonist.

Where is the raw link?

Good story. Looking forward to more.

Why are you reposting bound by knowledge?

Didnt mc say the magic warrior would achieve great feats later on in the story? Why is she is going to die so soon if he doesnt intefere?

Its dropped.

I dont see how the harem and romance tags are possible if the mc is this evil and rational.

If you could post a new chapter once youve moved that would be appreciated.

I would think purely from a biological standpoint a race with low reproduction rates would not look kindly on gay relationships.

Done

Join the discord server in my bio if you want to discuss more. Its difficult on here.

Its dissapointing for all the reasons ive stated. Having feelings for family is a part of it. I find the whole concept of a person with a family in past life taking new parents and siblings unbelievable. Imagine if one day you find urself living amongst strangers, can you call them mother, father and brother even if they treat you well? Author there are an infinite number of weaknesses one can have they dont have to be so predictable. Weakness of family and killing, are the most cliche ones used for heroic mcs.

All the issues I have with the novel author can be summed up in one statement. Keep your characters consistent. You treat the mc like a child in some cases and an adult in others. If he was a child I agree, he shud be hesitant about killing, not yet have a goal and require character development. But he is an adult whose lived in the world for 10 years.