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RebelXI
RebelXILv152yr
2022-04-06 13:43

after he killed off the smith Im gonna give this novel a pass. if you like dark and greedy mc this is the novel for you. overall the story is good but not for everyone.

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Thanks for your review.

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Welcome, potential readers. I just want to explain a few things about this novel you've clicked on. First of all, the story progresses really quickly after a couple of chapters, and it gets wild after that . Secondly, our mc may tick you off at first, but if you've read the prologue, you'll see how amazing he ends up becoming. He doesn't start out being overpowered from the get-go. His Gift seems useless, and to be honest, it is his application of this power that makes him seriously powerful. Another thing to note is that there will be a lot of touchy scenes depicted here. As someone who had been wronged by everyone, with no moral compass, Jeremy makes a lot of decisions that seem selfish and questionable. In a world such as this, it's very understandable. Finally, concerning the plot and storyline, character developments, progression and the likes, I can't speak for everyone, but it's top-tier. You can read and see for yourself This definitely won't be a novel you regret reading. WARNING: Mc starts off as a little edgy and his attitude may upset you. However, just be patient. He grows, and eventually... You'll all love him! If any of his thoughts and personality initially don't sit right with you just endure it, and make sure to voice your opinions. It's understandable for anyone who has gone through what he has that they will have an imperfect side, that's one of the beauty of this novel, realism. But, like the title of this book states... It is the 'RISE' of our dear MC. Let's all give honest reviews and comments as we read. Your feedback is really important to this author and the story's development.

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WARNING: THE MC IS A SLAVE AND A SERVENT TO A WOMAN NAMED LARA. MC IS ALWAYS MANIPULATED BY THIS WOMAN AND HE NEVER GETS FREE FROM HER . HE REMAINS A SLAVE AND A SERVENT TILL THE END. Another naive MC who thinks with his lower body. He risks his life multiple times to save random side characters, using the excuse that he wants them to level up. He doesn’t even seek revenge on the bully who tormented him during school, claiming that the bully has now turned into a good person. Meanwhile, the woman who repeatedly bullied and publicly shamed him is still alive, and this fool even risked his life to save her. The worst part of the novel is a character named Lara. She’s a psychiatrist who falls under the chaotic neutral category—the type of person who only cares about herself and will do anything for her survival and benefit. Initially captured by the MC, Lara manages to use her clever mind and manipulation to turn the tables. The MC, thinking he’s in control, is actually her puppet. Lara convinces this fool that she’s the only one in the world who truly understands him, and now he’s entirely under her control. It’s almost pathetic watching how the MC behaves. He believes he’s the one in charge, that he’s manipulating and controlling Lara, but the reality is the complete opposite. He tries to act smart but ends up looking like an idiot. Despite his supposed intelligence of over 16,000, he never demonstrates or behaves like someone with such intellect. Lara, on the other hand, takes full control. Since she’s physically weaker than the MC, she uses her acting skills to make this fool fall in love with her and gets everything she wants from him. This foolish MC even claims that Lara is just like him, bruhh.. that’s your first sign to eliminate her on the spot. His personality dictates that he should backstab allies or friends the moment they become useless (as he did with Paul), yet he completely fails to see through Lara’s manipulation. ANd just when you think it's couldn't get any worse, she again Manipulates the MC into giving her his hard earned demon cores and even made the MC give her multiple skills. She even manipulated the MC into creating a safe way she can earn xp and increase her own power, and what did the MC do? he just peovided her just that, like a pathetic slave he is. Then he serve her his limited food, and even guarded her like dog. In simple terms: The MC is a fool who has been entirely manipulated by a woman who wouldn’t hesitate to abandon or kill him if it benefits her. The novel is utterly filled with frustration and poison.

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