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Etiger789
Etiger789Lv153yr
2022-01-08 12:29

Bro rob luchi at 13 beat 500 armed soldiers by himself without much difficulty. Yes he had scars on his back from freaking conon balls yet he was still standing and even walked out like it was nothing and proceeded to defeat all the pirates as well. Yet your mc who's trained by some of the best swordsman can't even deal with what 20 people of the most weakest pirates in the weakest sea. And 10 million Berry bounty is barly noteworthy. Sigh and I was really looking forward to reading this. Besides the mc being weak and as the Arthur says weak minded 🙄, the gramer is really good and so is the update stability. Story development is meh so far and so is the charachter. The world is one peice, cliche, yes, but still an amazing world to read about. Especially from different perspectives.

One Piece: The Elemental Swordsman

xancia
4.6
35 Chs

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Nauuu
NauuuLv4

Bruh he was 7 years old when he fought the pirates, what do you expect? fighting 20 people when you're 7 is already pretty impressive. I bet even luffy can't beat any of that pirates when he's in that age.

3yr
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Etiger789
Etiger789Lv15

what are you on. Did you even read the chapters properly. He was born in 1495 and got attacked by pirates in 1507 he's clearly 12 going onto 13. And at a young age garp barley trained luffy he didn't take it seriously. And zero was beating adults at an even earlier age. so I ask what are you on about.

Nauuu:Bruh he was 7 years old when he fought the pirates, what do you expect? fighting 20 people when you're 7 is already pretty impressive. I bet even luffy can't beat any of that pirates when he's in that age.
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Anas_Nazim
Anas_NazimLv4

Dude just take a chill pill. One Piece have a lot of inconstancy to begin n with. And I don't see any didifferedce, he is in East blue where there aren't any monsters and Lucci was a trained assassin, there's a difference. But you won't get it anyway.

3yr
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mow
mowLv4

Was the mc also not a trained swordsman? lol

Anas_Nazim:Dude just take a chill pill. One Piece have a lot of inconstancy to begin n with. And I don't see any didifferedce, he is in East blue where there aren't any monsters and Lucci was a trained assassin, there's a difference. But you won't get it anyway.
2yr
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IwishtoDie22
IwishtoDie22Lv2

People dickriding an author so much they chosse to wilingly come up with excuses for bad writing and plotholes will never not be funny.

11mth
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xancia
xanciaAuthor

I see everyone else writing a note here as a review so I wanted to do the same. I've just finished writing the first small arc of the story. This is my first novel so I'm glad to see all the support so far. I hope I will be able to continue to deliver content for you guys, thank you for all the support. :)

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_Artemis69
_Artemis69Lv4

hey Author, is this really your first fanfic 'cause it's too good to be your first hahahaha. This book is really amazing, you better hurry up and read it!!!

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RexHarris
RexHarrisLv14

Really excellent so far. The special ability is balanced enough to not be too OP. The plot is interesting and his interactions with the original charecters as well !!! Keep it up

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FuckICaughtUp
FuckICaughtUpLv4

First of all I really appreciate the author for making a One Piece fanfic that's not just the strawhat crew plus one. The author really did a wonderful job at writing the characters, expanding the world in a viewpoint of a marine and incorporating the breathe styles in the fighting system of One Piece. The main lead also not just those know it all self inserts who cannot do mo wrong he's learning and growing as a character throughout the story. All in all if you like an overall good read and not just about One Piece fanfiction this is a high recommendation and kudos to the author for his skill at making this work especially as this is his first writing I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future.

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Daoist423242
Daoist423242Lv12

Too bad you made him a celestial dragon’s dog. author what would the mc do if he saw celestial dragons enslave others?? Cause marines are there to protect celestial dragons and world government...

3yr
Lucifer951
Lucifer951Lv13

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DaoistZ1vOeN
DaoistZ1vOeNLv1

Really good, just hope you dont drop it ................................................................................................................................

3yr
TheChosenOne_1
TheChosenOne_1Lv3

Great story, hope you keep writing and don't drop please.-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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LaughingArkBuilder
LaughingArkBuilderLv14

It's an amazing start, can't wait for what wod happen after. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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