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Daoist423242
Daoist423242Lv123yr
2022-01-04 17:26

Too bad you made him a celestial dragon’s dog. author what would the mc do if he saw celestial dragons enslave others?? Cause marines are there to protect celestial dragons and world government...

One Piece: The Elemental Swordsman

xancia
4.6
35 Chs

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xancia
xanciaAuthor

Why don't you wait to find out? If you think the mc will be a celestial dragons 'dog' as you put it, then I don't think you've been paying attention to the story. If you don't like the fact that he joined the marines, there's plenty of other fanfictions out there for you to enjoy, no need to keep reading this one if you're not having a good time.

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origin_seth
origin_sethLv4

joining the marine is not the problem, what the most hatefull is that marine protect to cùñtial dragon.. they cant do anything to them , look at garp, he want to kill those guys, but he cant coz marine grip his weakness. pirate and marine have a good and bad side, pirate can kill and råpë or raid anyone in island. of course pirate is bad. while marine should protect and etc but still allowing slave trading coz cùñtial dragon fancies the slaves. so peace out. im not reading this work yet but this stay on my libr until he dare to kill those cùñt dragons fish tank head ugly.

xancia:Why don't you wait to find out? If you think the mc will be a celestial dragons 'dog' as you put it, then I don't think you've been paying attention to the story. If you don't like the fact that he joined the marines, there's plenty of other fanfictions out there for you to enjoy, no need to keep reading this one if you're not having a good time.
3yr
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xancia
xanciaAuthor

I respect your decision, once the story has progressed further, feel free to come back and find out what happens

origin_seth:joining the marine is not the problem, what the most hatefull is that marine protect to cùñtial dragon.. they cant do anything to them , look at garp, he want to kill those guys, but he cant coz marine grip his weakness. pirate and marine have a good and bad side, pirate can kill and råpë or raid anyone in island. of course pirate is bad. while marine should protect and etc but still allowing slave trading coz cùñtial dragon fancies the slaves. so peace out. im not reading this work yet but this stay on my libr until he dare to kill those cùñt dragons fish tank head ugly.
3yr
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Godfather_
Godfather_Lv1

This wasnt even really a review🤦🏿‍♂️

3yr
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Sheen_escapee
Sheen_escapeeLv4

i think its for power bro, like he's after the rokushiki manual?

3yr
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Daoist423242
Daoist423242Lv12

Some are just adventurer, luffy isnt even a pirate causE he never looted civilians.

origin_seth:joining the marine is not the problem, what the most hatefull is that marine protect to cùñtial dragon.. they cant do anything to them , look at garp, he want to kill those guys, but he cant coz marine grip his weakness. pirate and marine have a good and bad side, pirate can kill and råpë or raid anyone in island. of course pirate is bad. while marine should protect and etc but still allowing slave trading coz cùñtial dragon fancies the slaves. so peace out. im not reading this work yet but this stay on my libr until he dare to kill those cùñt dragons fish tank head ugly.
3yr
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luminous1_vanqu10
luminous1_vanqu10Lv4

can you recommend some fanfiction : mc joins marine i cant find many of these i like this fanfiction too[img=recommend][img=recommend]

xancia:Why don't you wait to find out? If you think the mc will be a celestial dragons 'dog' as you put it, then I don't think you've been paying attention to the story. If you don't like the fact that he joined the marines, there's plenty of other fanfictions out there for you to enjoy, no need to keep reading this one if you're not having a good time.
2yr
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Tunic01
Tunic01Lv15

Ok?

Godfather_:This wasnt even really a review🤦🏿‍♂️
2yr
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I see everyone else writing a note here as a review so I wanted to do the same. I've just finished writing the first small arc of the story. This is my first novel so I'm glad to see all the support so far. I hope I will be able to continue to deliver content for you guys, thank you for all the support. :)

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hey Author, is this really your first fanfic 'cause it's too good to be your first hahahaha. This book is really amazing, you better hurry up and read it!!!

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Really excellent so far. The special ability is balanced enough to not be too OP. The plot is interesting and his interactions with the original charecters as well !!! Keep it up

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