Bro rob luchi at 13 beat 500 armed soldiers by himself without much difficulty. Yes he had scars on his back from freaking conon balls yet he was still standing and even walked out like it was nothing and proceeded to defeat all the pirates as well. Yet your mc who's trained by some of the best swordsman can't even deal with what 20 people of the most weakest pirates in the weakest sea. And 10 million Berry bounty is barly noteworthy. Sigh and I was really looking forward to reading this. Besides the mc being weak and as the Arthur says weak minded 🙄, the gramer is really good and so is the update stability. Story development is meh so far and so is the charachter. The world is one peice, cliche, yes, but still an amazing world to read about. Especially from different perspectives.

I see everyone else writing a note here as a review so I wanted to do the same. I've just finished writing the first small arc of the story. This is my first novel so I'm glad to see all the support so far. I hope I will be able to continue to deliver content for you guys, thank you for all the support. :)

hey Author, is this really your first fanfic 'cause it's too good to be your first hahahaha. This book is really amazing, you better hurry up and read it!!!

Really excellent so far. The special ability is balanced enough to not be too OP. The plot is interesting and his interactions with the original charecters as well !!! Keep it up

First of all I really appreciate the author for making a One Piece fanfic that's not just the strawhat crew plus one. The author really did a wonderful job at writing the characters, expanding the world in a viewpoint of a marine and incorporating the breathe styles in the fighting system of One Piece. The main lead also not just those know it all self inserts who cannot do mo wrong he's learning and growing as a character throughout the story. All in all if you like an overall good read and not just about One Piece fanfiction this is a high recommendation and kudos to the author for his skill at making this work especially as this is his first writing I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future.

Too bad you made him a celestial dragon’s dog. author what would the mc do if he saw celestial dragons enslave others?? Cause marines are there to protect celestial dragons and world government...

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Really good, just hope you dont drop it ................................................................................................................................

Great story, hope you keep writing and don't drop please.-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------

It's an amazing start, can't wait for what wod happen after. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]