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Zer_0
Zer_0Lv61yr
2023-06-06 08:17

At first, it was nice, light FF with acceptable grammar, ok dialogs and fine plot, even if somewhat forced, making it an enjoyable read... However, at some point it started to feel as if it was written by ChatGPT. Gender pronouns are sometimes switching multiple times in one sentence, plot feels forced with a strength of a bunch of hardcore shippers and while the memes woven into the story were nice at first, with the way it is written now makes it just painful to read. I started to catch myself just glossing through paragraphs of dry humor, boring fight scenes and "peak comedy" as if taken from C rated ecchi anime from 80s, hoping for it to be better again. But maybe it's best to let it go...

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just let go bro it might not be worth it not anymore

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