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Man_of_culture
Man_of_cultureLv41yr
2023-01-06 08:05

There are a lot of basic grammar mistakes, like in ever other sentance. It makes this novel look like a badly translated Chinese novel. Author you have already written so many chapters, at least use some basic correction tool or get a proofreader or something. It would make the FF far better than this mess.

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Cha_D_Bear
Cha_D_BearLv4

sentence* could use a basic correction tool yourself, eh? just kidding

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