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vkg313Lv63yr
2022-01-29 01:55

This story is a bit childish. Like, the reading level is a bit lower than normal. There's not enough "showing" and too much "telling". I don't get the feeling that this story is going to be particularly great. There are definitely better options out there. The MC isn't that great either.

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4.4
40 Chs

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No_Reading_No_Life
No_Reading_No_LifeLv15

Thanks for the warning. Can you recommend some good novels in this genre?

3yr
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AxiomS
AxiomSLv2

So, Novel with another system 🥺. I wish i was really good at Chinese, so i wouldn't be disappointed if the novel wasn't translated. Bruh I fantasize too much 💔. #PositiveReview #SupportTranslator #SpecialReader #FinishTheBook #DontHiatus #GoodBook #HighQualityTranslation Follow my Tiktok : @douyin_land

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archimedez
archimedezLv5

when I found the raw link, there were lots of comment asking for it so I just made a new comment with the link cuz I am lazy 我的数据面板 maybe I will update with more info for the novel after reading more in the raw chapters. have a good day

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B0B1
B0B1Lv4

Raw?...........................................................................................................................................

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bookguy
bookguyLv15

I don't know what to say about this honestly. The first chapter started off interesting enough but by the second chapter I had zero desire to continue to read it. I mean it's not the worst thing in the world or anything. I've probably read far more of far worse novels. This is just kind of not interesting to me.

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Dimensionist
DimensionistLv15

A good story, that *actually* feels like a proper novel. The system also isn't randomly provided for no reason, but is something the original owner of the body already had, through a family heirloom (likely the product of an evil god). The world background is interesting, with a 'church' that is fundamentally anti-theist. It's also not the kind of novel where all the women are thirsting for the MC (particularly because he's 10 right now) - the playboy is his mentor. The constant refrain of 'little boy' is a bit annoying though - you couldn't translate that differently? Anyway, so far it's solid, definitely better than most novels posted on this site. Hope it gets picked.

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Tigrallef
TigrallefLv4

I read it up until it's 'Finale not finale chapter' and liked it, unfortunately the author didn't really finish it. He wrote fairly far into the story but at some point decided to drop it(for health? work? lack of interest? lack of money flowing in?) when realistically it was more than halfway done. The 'Finale not finale' chapter lays out the rest of the story in almost bullet point form so you at least know he had a rough plan for the rest. I really liked it too, and at least it wasn't fully dropped...but still!

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Myrddin_duw
Myrddin_duwLv2

Raw?........................ . . ....... .....R.......A.................W ...... .... .....? .....................R ........... .. . ....A ....................W .....................?

3yr
SaxonViolence
SaxonViolenceLv6

Reveal spoiler

3yr
sawwon
sawwonLv1

ok, it was easy enough to read all of what's been translated so far, but it was kind of boring tbh if any of the other trial reads are any good (haven't read them yet) you should maybe pass this one over

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