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vkg3133dCommentedI mean, isn’t he guessing right now?
Aric smiled teasingly, "Guess?"- vkg3133dCommented
lol as long as you have an extreme adaptation physique
A: When there is a will, there is a way. - vkg3133dPosted
Sorry is alright so far. Major problems with the high number of Info dumps in every chapter. Like, we are basically spammed with loads of information that isn’t usually super relevant to the scene, and unnecessary to know at this time. In addition, it feels like the author constantly repeats certain info numerous times, and you slowly start skipping lines and paragraphs. If the author learns to release information in an appropriate manner and remove unnecessary information from the chapters, it would make the plot flow better.
- vkg3137dCommentedCh 130 Chapter 129
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Bully the world
"You finally showed up." - vkg31323dCommented
lol imagine pretending that you brought peace when all it led to was chaos
In theory, no matter from what perspective, she, Bai Qing'er, was not wrong. After all, everything she did was to eradicate the demonic path and bring peace to the world. - vkg31326dCommented
Seems like it was a bad idea then
This act foretold the raging storm of retaliation that the Sand shinobi would unleash in response to their unfathomable loss. - vkg31326dCommented
Chakra ring feels kind of cheaty
Thanks to the chakra storage ring, Kyomu's depleted chakra was swiftly replenished, ensuring his combat readiness. - vkg31326dCommented
Stealing people’s lines lol
"Art is an explosion!" - vkg31328dCommentedCh 73 Chapter 73 Not Optimistic
- vkg31330dCommentedWright crossed his arms, a trace of pride evident on his stoic face.
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I thought he could only hold the ability for a short amount of time
Third, he released his shadow to stand guard. - vkg31330dCommented
Because you like…hunting
"It's strange. I'm quite certain I don't enjoy killing, but why do I feel this way?" - vkg31330dCommented
Is this how that works? Or ff tweaking?
Typically, a Nen user would fill up all their memory capacity by developing a mature Nen ability. - vkg31330dCommented
That’s good. Don’t be arrogant or ridiculous. There are many strange things out there
After all, a reader's perspective, at most, allowed him to see a partial view of this world, not to mention there's still vast unknown land beyond the 'known' world. - vkg3131mthCommented
It wasn’t meaningless. The other side suffered greatly too in exchange.
Even though the Star Lord of Red Kun retaliated fiercely, it was meaningless since the person was already dead. - vkg3131mthCommented
When an author has little to say, they start adding food cooking instructions and descriptions. This story is already off to a worrying start…
The old man dumps the entire content into the pot; as the porridge roils, the dark shrimps and crabs gradually turn red, and the delicate fish flesh turns snowy white. A delicious, fishy sweetness mixed with the subtle aroma of the porridge spreads through the air. With a sprinkle of salt, it becomes truly appetizing. - vkg3131mthCommented
This is going to be an awesome passive during war
[Passive Skill: Sixth in Line] - vkg3131mthCommented
I hope you aren’t going to ship the MC with these snakes
"If you like, I can roast some for you, and I have a hundred ways to cook toads," Kyomu looked around, "Do we have any here? I'll cook some for you."