Item: Delëted
Rating: 2.2
Author: Black_Sirius_4225

Black_Sirius_4225Lv113yr

2021-12-19 09:26

The plot itself is good, rasing the future herpes of the universes, however the grammar is kind of difficult to understand. Most of the sentences make it difficult to understand what is really going on.

Delëted

Moziel

4.7

189 Chs

Liked by 18 people

Replies8

Mohammed_JawadLv4

Lol herpes

3yr

Black_Sirius_4225Lv11

it supose to be heroes but misspelled it T^T

3yr

SirLeonNightstarLv4

That's just you fam. It's translated anyway, I wouldn't be surprised if some of it WAS hard to read but it doesn't take 200 IQ to discern and read between the lines.

3yr

Elmarc_YarkaLv13

FUTURE HERPES

3yr

GreatDaoofspaceLv15

romance?Harém?

3yr

YourMomIsGreatLv5

no need to say sorry, bro........ . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . we know you want to herpes 😜😜😜

Black_Sirius_4225:it supose to be heroes but misspelled it T^T

3yr

mazzakaneXscarlemaLv2

why do i always somehow find you?

GreatDaoofspace:romance?Harém?

2yr

GreatDaoofspaceLv15

Hahahah, maybe fate

mazzakaneXscarlema:why do i always somehow find you?

2yr

Other Reviews

Genesis_youLv2

First of all, I want to sincerely thank the translator for the quality work. The translation is not lame, of course there are minor flaws, but they do not greatly spoil the reading of this fanfic. I love such original works with excellent and interesting ideas, otherwise it’s already enough that everyone repeats one after another. This is one of the best fanfic themes, so I'll thank the translator again and ask you not to abandon this masterpiece👍👍👍😍😍

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GodosLv12

Reveal spoiler

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SpoiledSecretsLv5

Literally just every person possible trying to get MC into a relation. I mean every person too like some old lady to his 3 year old son. Honestly what else can you expect from a Chinese author..

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Hero_MTLv5

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Amiel_JashenLv4

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say

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A3r0nLv12

Greatly surprised by this story. The translation is quite good even though there’s some mistakes here and there. Recommend to read it, good story to pass time

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