Review Detail of Universal_Monarch in Picking Up Beautiful Girls In The Post-Apocalyptic World!
Review detail
wth HOW on earth did this trash get high ranking's like these, THE GIRL that slapped him and threw him out of the company is the girl he decided to live in shelter with and is gonna help her bro... and he is a fricken simp DUDE this is just stupid, gave a 2 cuz i like the apocalypse concept more specifically Zombie's too bad tho :((
Picking Up Beautiful Girls In The Post-Apocalyptic World!
D_RegalInsomniac
Liked by 43 people
LIKEReplies13
I got tired of reading this. Editors must be critical to everyone, even themselves. Something as basic as a comment is a reflection of what you are as an editor. I don't care about the content, but please fix it into an appropriate one. You're an editor yourself(as claimed by you), you know what I meant.
Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU:bro I can't just give you a constructive criticism just because... if you don't see the point can't show you... the most is because this IS your ideas... i can put ideas in track not a story... i select and put up story before they go published not after that... also you do read your readers comment you should know... also a writer after writing should always put emphasis on how the reader will get the story... now how you(author) get or read the story.... cz you write teh story for readers to read and understand... not just for you... and I've already said the most basic problem... with a constructive criticism... the MC doesn't need to be the trash to grow... just like a child can grow to be anyone... anyone can grow to be anyone as well... I've already given you the criticism... with construction how you should go about... the nest depends on you how you wanna go... the only thing i can say is... for writing a story only you are not the only one who should enjoy your writing... all the readers as well... and sometimes readers pov of a story is important...
before saying others to be mature can you be one first !?? all the forced development simp and all the braindead sh it !?? bro you don't need to make a character disgusting to give development just so you can make the storyline... form this it can be seen that your story has no depth of it's own... othe than you giving in you fantasy ideas... so please do look at yourself first before you say something.... and no I'm not a author but an editor who has read and certified a lot of books... so can at least say this much...
D_RegalInsomniac:Try to read a little more before you actually review dude. Maybe with this, people can see what a bad review looks like because it's obvious you didn't even go past chapter fifteen of the novel. Be a little more mature, thank you.
Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU:before saying others to be mature can you be one first !?? all the forced development simp and all the braindead sh it !?? bro you don't need to make a character disgusting to give development just so you can make the storyline... form this it can be seen that your story has no depth of it's own... othe than you giving in you fantasy ideas... so please do look at yourself first before you say something.... and no I'm not a author but an editor who has read and certified a lot of books... so can at least say this much...
bro I can't just give you a constructive criticism just because... if you don't see the point can't show you... the most is because this IS your ideas... i can put ideas in track not a story... i select and put up story before they go published not after that... also you do read your readers comment you should know... also a writer after writing should always put emphasis on how the reader will get the story... now how you(author) get or read the story.... cz you write teh story for readers to read and understand... not just for you... and I've already said the most basic problem... with a constructive criticism... the MC doesn't need to be the trash to grow... just like a child can grow to be anyone... anyone can grow to be anyone as well... I've already given you the criticism... with construction how you should go about... the nest depends on you how you wanna go... the only thing i can say is... for writing a story only you are not the only one who should enjoy your writing... all the readers as well... and sometimes readers pov of a story is important...
D_RegalInsomniac:No, you aren't... I'm quite sure an editor would give constructive criticism, not whatever this is
Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU:bro I can't just give you a constructive criticism just because... if you don't see the point can't show you... the most is because this IS your ideas... i can put ideas in track not a story... i select and put up story before they go published not after that... also you do read your readers comment you should know... also a writer after writing should always put emphasis on how the reader will get the story... now how you(author) get or read the story.... cz you write teh story for readers to read and understand... not just for you... and I've already said the most basic problem... with a constructive criticism... the MC doesn't need to be the trash to grow... just like a child can grow to be anyone... anyone can grow to be anyone as well... I've already given you the criticism... with construction how you should go about... the nest depends on you how you wanna go... the only thing i can say is... for writing a story only you are not the only one who should enjoy your writing... all the readers as well... and sometimes readers pov of a story is important...
If you constantly have to defend your novel by telling readers to ‘endure’ through 20 chaps, then you should really think about editing the beginning to make it more captivating. The start of a novel is what draws the reader in and not a lot of casual readers will read 20 chapters just to see if they like the story.
D_RegalInsomniac:Read it first and ask me this again after twenty chaps. See you there
AzazelTriMagnus:I got tired of reading this. Editors must be critical to everyone, even themselves. Something as basic as a comment is a reflection of what you are as an editor. I don't care about the content, but please fix it into an appropriate one. You're an editor yourself(as claimed by you), you know what I meant.
Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU:bro I can't just give you a constructive criticism just because... if you don't see the point can't show you... the most is because this IS your ideas... i can put ideas in track not a story... i select and put up story before they go published not after that... also you do read your readers comment you should know... also a writer after writing should always put emphasis on how the reader will get the story... now how you(author) get or read the story.... cz you write teh story for readers to read and understand... not just for you... and I've already said the most basic problem... with a constructive criticism... the MC doesn't need to be the trash to grow... just like a child can grow to be anyone... anyone can grow to be anyone as well... I've already given you the criticism... with construction how you should go about... the nest depends on you how you wanna go... the only thing i can say is... for writing a story only you are not the only one who should enjoy your writing... all the readers as well... and sometimes readers pov of a story is important...
IKR i was honestly horrified reading that, let's just completely push aside the points he tried to get across and wether they were good or bad, but his writing, grammar and just the way he wrote made me horrified for any novel that has this kind of editor... suddenly im starting to understand why so many novels on this side has such poor grammar and structure ugh ._.
Waiser:being an editor, you sure make a lot of grammatical errors
Cause he doesn't really need to defend anything. The book is very good for webnovel standards. I'd argue it's one of the best I've read on here. The beginning is decent and is more than enough to grab the attention.Dunno why the author gives these idiots the time of the day...
Fellbane:If you constantly have to defend your novel by telling readers to ‘endure’ through 20 chaps, then you should really think about editing the beginning to make it more captivating. The start of a novel is what draws the reader in and not a lot of casual readers will read 20 chapters just to see if they like the story.