The author's grammar is correct in this one. You cannot use the auxiliary verb 'be' because the sentence will become 'nor will it ever be recovered' to make up for the auxiliary verb.

What about "Parallel Identity Fantasy"?

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Actually, it was because she had taken a brunt of the bad rumors around Andrew as well. In a setting where the strong has the say in matters, Andrew was indeed too weak. Compared to her high potential, Andrew would be unfit to be her fiance if he did not get a system. Also, women don't like being the subject of bad rumors, so she unconsciously harbored some resentment on Andrew.

It is because he wants to incorporate and leave his past through that story. For many, it must be that he's just plagiarizing a story, but it is not like that for him. Everything in his past life, even his love for his past life's girlfriend , will be left as a memory in that story as he opens up a new page as Shishio Oga. I must say that 5 Centimeters Per Second is a perfect fit for it.

What do you mean? It's the perfect gaze of a true gentleman.

Mine is the reverse of that.

Girl. How naughty. Haha!

Actually, in regards to the context, the grammar is correct. If you still insist on making it more specific, the correct term would be "not that good" instead of very or only.

I got tired of reading this. Editors must be critical to everyone, even themselves. Something as basic as a comment is a reflection of what you are as an editor. I don't care about the content, but please fix it into an appropriate one. You're an editor yourself(as claimed by you), you know what I meant.

I had read this story five times in the course of when it was still unfinished. I had re-read it thrice when it got completed. The whole story got carried out decently, assimilating the character into the story's lore. It was also one of the best Akame Ga Kill fanfic out there. The prologue was a tad unrealistic but was quite good as well. The pace was somewhat slow but gave it justice in many parts of the story. Interesting character development. I'll give the author that. However, there were more flaws than merits. There were too many grammatical errors, especially in prepositions and word choice, Dialogue tags got improperly utilized, and the vocabulary was too limited. There were many times wherein I couldn't immerse myself in a particular scene or fight. The bloody and ruthless atmosphere of the lore, which was what Akame Ga Kill is known for, was lackluster. The romance part of the story heavily influenced it, making it subpar. The story's development was lacking too, and it was easy to get disconnected from the characters. Such was the case with the MC, as his character development became disjointed in the middle part of the story. The original characters' (in Akame ga Kill) personalities were not consistent with their base personality (in the original work). Nevertheless, this story is a good read. I highly recommend this story for casual readers and not so much for critical readers. If you can ignore the typos and plotholes, this is for you. P.S. I get it that the author is substandard, but they must have improved, no? It has been a year since the story's completion. A revision is now up for the stands, even if it is only fanfic.

I get the point, but you're being unnecessarily creepy.

It is still wrong. The author should have written "...for that 'he'" instead of 'he'.

It is still wrong. The author should have written "...for that 'he'" instead of 'he'.

Do you mean to say, he doesn't know the saying of think before you f*ck?

It is also revealed later at Arc 2 that Kai is a Zodiac codenamed Leo. This gave him incredible strength that is approximately equivalent to that of a mature magical beast. Even if his ability is fully restricted, his sword skills, battle experience and immense strength is more than enough to carry him in most fights.

As of currently, there's no character in the novel with that kind of skill. However, that is a good scenario to tackle. Let us say that there's someone with that ability. Is it an ability that only works on the user themselves, or is it an AoE ability? If it is a user-restrictive ability, which is unlikely, Kai may not hear their body activity, but he will certainly hear how they affect their surroundings, especially air. He can make battle adjustments based on that. If it is an AoE ability, Kai's ability will get restricted for the most part, but it will make his judgement more accurate, as the user cannot affect his own body with his own ability. AoE abilities mostly have a safe zone, which is the user. It is specifically seen in games as well. Kai will be able to precisely and clearly listen to their body activity and win the fight.

With the threat of sparse human population and rampaging magical beasts, surely they won't be able to allocate human resources just for an ability test. More so to the fact that it is a rare case and there might not even be an available person who is willing to do so.

Well, even though Tasha bragged about his advantages, there's not much you can do to counter it. After all, he can hear even the faintest of sounds when he unleashes his ability. Add it to the fact that he can hear the body rhythm of the opponent.

Here are some factors contributing to his expertise: First, his age. Rome is not built on one day. He have surely trained and honed his ability. We know just how troublesome it is. Second, his parents are ability users as well. Surely they will supervise his training in adapting to his ability. Third, his mental strength. Even in the fight, he is actively analyzing the battle situation and is able to remain calm. His mental strength contributed to him filtering his surroundings and only getting the most important information and focus. The surrounding distractions are not eliminated, but more so place in the periphery. It's just like a well-taken picture. You're eyes will focus on the most impactful and main point, while the background is either ignored, blurred, or acts as an enhancing effect on the main object. This is the most contributing factor of his prowess. This is also part of if close-combat expertise. Lastly, the laws of the world. Surely the world and the 'power source' will not let a baby boy thoroughly suffer from his ability. There should be buffer periods and the ability itself grows along with the user. He can currently hear all sounds in a few kilometer radius, but that should not be the case when he is young.