Item: My Multi-talented Wife
Rating: 4.6
Author: GoGo

GoGoLv22yr

2022-01-01 18:01

The story and premise is good and it has potential as settings like these have not been done yet. Romance is not my cup of tea as most of the time the story is shown form one perspective that this novel is not doing and in my books is pretty good. We need to have both side of coins and their own lives and how they intersect with each other. Would also love if the ML changes with time due to his experience living FL. The only gripe I have with this novel is the grammar and typos. A lot of work is needed in this department, I mean a lot. There are a lot of formatting issues in the novel as well. I would suggest the author to read their work and fix the formatting issues, google docs may help a lot in this problem, you can even use grammarly addon in google docs to fix your grammar mistakes.

My Multi-talented Wife

Friendlyauthor121

4.7

7 Chs

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Friendlyauthor121Author

Thanks for your review and I'll do my best to not to disappoint you...

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