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TheMizMind
TheMizMindLv13yr
2022-01-01 17:19

Has good potential. Grammar needs work, and chapters are very short but can be overcome with quantity. I also like the layout making it easier to read instead of huge blocks of text which can be hard for a web novel. I gave this 5*'s but in all honesty, I don't know what it deserves as I don't read this genre often or ever.

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Thanks a lot, and I try to minimize my grammatical errors because English isn't my first language...so sometimes it's difficult for me to translate from my language into English...

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