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Dulles
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2021-12-18 04:22

‘’Let’s be like the many authors hating on Naruto and fanboying on Hinata.’’ No thanks. It’s poor writing to go for cheap ways to add girls into your harem to bash a character and make them ooc. And don’t tell me the cruel rejection was in character. The quality of the story outside of such boring ‘’plots’’ is roughly average but I’d really recommend to avoid this kind of path. Could have made it much better by having her slowly fall out of love with Naruto et and developping a romance. The chat group also seems to be mostly there to create a harem for your self-inserts, that’s another thumbs down.

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Ulescu_Mihai
Ulescu_MihaiLv5

For me is still interesting tht my opinion anyway

AlphaZwei
AlphaZweiLv5

Personally, for me, Harem will always be Thumb up. The story on the other hand...Your review shall be taken into consideration.

_oinkchan
_oinkchanLv5

Everyone hates Naruto... I even hate Hinata. Adult Hinata is hot though but my favorite will always be Hanabi.

Ototsu_Yume
Ototsu_YumeLv11

Movie Hinata is pretty good too but then movie Hinata is pretty much just Hanabi. xD

_oinkchan:Everyone hates Naruto... I even hate Hinata. Adult Hinata is hot though but my favorite will always be Hanabi.
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