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Though I'm not a fan of the character choice regarding the protagonist, this has been a rather enjoyable story so far. I wish there were more chapters considering the lack of Danganronpa in fanfiction. I admit I'm curious about how he will deal with Junko. She's a genius for a reason.
I didn't think I would enjoy this story as much as I did when I tried it. The characters are all, well, in character. You genuinely feel like you're reading a script of Modern Family's episode after episode, except with a self-insert with a system. The beginning was excellent, and the interactions have been top-tier.
A typical Akikan story. You can expect a complete hypocrite and self-entitled protagonist. The system sucks as it forces the character into being a villain (which goes against the story's title). The character goes unpunished for his attitude and acts recklessly even though Sirzechs would kill him regardless of the consequences for treating his sister like this (and he would make sure the engagement doesn't go through.) The character also somehow is much, much stronger than the actual Riser despite just reincarnating... Blue fire? "Mirage" clones? Instead of panicking and acting weird, he's confident and rolls with everything that goes his way, destroying any sense of realism. It's a story that's quite a bit worse than the others, even though the quality of the language has improved.
I‘m impressed on how you portray the characters and the slice of life aspect of Majikoi so well.
‘’Let’s be like the many authors hating on Naruto and fanboying on Hinata.’’ No thanks. It’s poor writing to go for cheap ways to add girls into your harem to bash a character and make them ooc. And don’t tell me the cruel rejection was in character. The quality of the story outside of such boring ‘’plots’’ is roughly average but I’d really recommend to avoid this kind of path. Could have made it much better by having her slowly fall out of love with Naruto et and developping a romance. The chat group also seems to be mostly there to create a harem for your self-inserts, that’s another thumbs down.