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Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv123yr
2021-12-13 11:51

It seems to be a translation of a Chinese fanfic, I can't be sure without the author confirming it because it's well translated. Unfortunately the characters seem to act based on Chinese society, even in the US, other than that the symbol used for lines (eg 'speech') is commonly used for thoughts in most novels/fanfics and this makes everything a little weird. Writing isn't very natural either. The story isn't engaging and doesn't feel realistic to read. It feels kind of artificial (it's hard to describe the feeling) it's not a quality issue but a writing style issue.

Starting as a Jumper on Marvel Multiverse

AurelionSoul
3.3
74 Chs

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Iron_Man_3000
Iron_Man_3000Lv14

It may be translated well… but the Chinese elements aren’t good and make sense for a team of superheroes from the states to have Chinese formality… etc, you get what I’m saying and implying

3yr
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Daoistunderlord
DaoistunderlordLv14

Unfortunately it's a translation of a Chinese novel. It was translated well the problem lies in the interaction of characters, they feel off because it's in USA but everyone acts like they are chinese or at least from a chinese novel.

3yr

Riiskynes
RiiskynesLv2

I thought it was a new story, but you only changed the name of the protagonist of a novel called "Marvel Began Shuttling the Heavens" in MTL, even the chapters have the same name, I already said that this novel was familiar to me :T

3yr
Tito_Falxus
Tito_FalxusLv4

I didn't read a single world, apart of the synopsis, but I give the 5 stars only bcz of the idea of the fic <3

3yr
Ralle_Levin
Ralle_LevinLv3

Written by an idiot, translated by an idiot, for idiots. And since i need 140 words, I'll just write very irrelevant things right here that have absolutely no meaning whatsoever.

3yr
jonatham
jonathamLv6

after reading i will not continue reading the mc is illogical... it could be better .

3yr
daoofomnilock
daoofomnilockLv3

MC is very dumb and pathetic. This just feels like that the author is writing just for the sake of extending a barely thought out story and increasing word count with useless things.

3yr
Monalishingun
MonalishingunLv10

I thought this was an original at first, but the moment he was described as "Asian", I instantly knew this is Chinese fanfiction reskin that the uploader didn't even put enough effort to hide the fakeness. I thought this was an original at first, but the moment he was described as "Asian", I instantly knew this is Chinese fanfiction reskin that the uploader didn't even put enough effort to hide the fakeness. I thought this was an original at first, but the moment he was described as "Asian", I instantly knew this is Chinese fanfiction reskin that the uploader didn't even put enough effort to hide the fakeness.

3yr
Vanxy
VanxyLv14

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3yr
Iron_Man_3000
Iron_Man_3000Lv14

-The updates are good considering you have it set to a countdown…. -The story is kinda good -But the worst is the Chinese elements that don’t translate well into English Americans do not act like this at all…. It’s confusing and frustrating… We don’t call an old man a Respected Elder -You get what I’m implying -The story idea is great -You need to get an English born editor that’s fluent in Chinese or your native language to translate it and fix it into an American or English grammatical way of speaking. -Thanks for the Story

3yr
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