Here is my honest review. I've read this novel up to chapter 11 and so far I have to say that it's a story with a great concept. I will list some positives and negatives that might influence your reading. Negatives: Bad grammar, if you haven't read novels with bad grammar before and gained the ability of auto correct in your brain this will ruin the entire experience Cliche: Starts of original up to the 9th chapter he starts having pills for strength and meeting a gang member after mentioning it at least 3 different times. Starts talking about his boss and how he is a "real criminal." Confusing currency: You will be stuck in googke asking for the exchange rates for the currency since you're never explained before hand or showing how much the currency they use is( for example Phillip spent 20 pesos ( 1 us dollar)) there is no end card or end of chapter of what he makes that day or if it does you got to go to google to exchange the currency to something you recognize. Positives: Original idea: This author presents us an idea not touched upon that much. Good concept: The idea of someone who literally goes rags to riches by tapping is an idea not explored before that should be used more Setting: It provides a decent enough setting to know where the characters are at and what is happening. overall a 3/5 Decent writing with cliche elements and a confusing currency. Should attempt to try to read to see if you have a different experience
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