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KinghtariusWR
KinghtariusWRLv152yr
2022-02-28 17:08

i dunno how to describe about this book. it has a fast pace story but slow building plot. most chapters that you read is only about eat, sleep, with a tiny portion of new plot about the story. the way mc behave is so dumb. mc keep going distract with new thing and then suddenly in the next chapter author said mc already did something which mc neglected in the previous chapter. for it really annoying to see mc with all the golden finger that he has but cant use it to the maximum efficiency. i pay to read until chapter 80 but when it goes to privilege section, i think this story is not worth the coin that I need to spend. basically you spend money just to read mc eat and sleep lol so tge story need rewrite to make more details and mc need a lot of stuff to make it more cool to be an mc with golden fingers. the world around need more detail so the reader can get into the story not just become like a passerby who read to know and after that nothing to feel. and please revamp the chapter, coz reader need more rich plot than just seeing mc eat, mc tired then go to sleep coz it feel like we read a boring diary of a boring guy not a novel at all.

Tap Tycoon System!

YouthGod
3.9
253 Chs

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YouthGod
YouthGodAuthor

Hello, Readers! It's your author here! So, I just decided to make a review so that in case some of you had questions, you can drop it here. The book might not be the best out there, but I'll try my best to make it enjoyable for you all. Thank you for reading!

2yr

Madara_Uchiha
Madara_UchihaLv5

I don't understand why the protagonist is so stupid, he doesn't think before making decisions, why doesn't he increase his level first since it increases the amount of money he earns per tap? Why does he type so slowly? He uses an application on his phone, has he tried to get an automatic clicker? If it works, he can click up to 1000 times per second and even if it doesn't work, he will have at least try.

2yr
d2mit
d2mitLv11

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Saltyfig
SaltyfigLv11

Brain dead and annoying MC. Forgetful impulsive and just dull. There is no world background MC is overwhelming excited that the little IQ hes shown to have just stops functioning in every situation. He is a reincarnate but thats not shown in anyway so whats the point in even throwing that in there.

2yr
shrEk2o3
shrEk2o3Lv12

Syper thumbs up. Amazing novel, plot, character. if you're looking for that page turner e-book, check this one out! you won't regret it. so, what are you waiting for?! Read!

2yr
Obikun
ObikunLv13

Please do not drop it author. You got a very original context and you could take it very far and high. I just hope that the chapter could be a little bigger but great job đź‘Ťđź‘Ťđź‘Ś

2yr
Brandon_Downtain
Brandon_DowntainLv15

Deleted my previous review to post this one. the story was decent and it was moving in a good direction but the author doesnt update it frequently enough to justify the paywall placed on it. it also has some Issues with character development.

2yr
UwuCreyo
UwuCreyoLv13

The novel was good until the alien thingy ruined i feel like it just taken the only good thing about the novel too bad... I hope you Mr author a good journey in making this book.

2yr
PinnacleExistence
PinnacleExistenceLv14

it's alright.. there's a lot of cockblocking to do the things he must do.. mc is also not as bright as you would like, making the story slower because of it, and everything you are waiting for, seems like is always looming but isn't reachable anytime soon.. to resume the novel; it feels like there's a debuffer installed and that prevents it from reaching its full potential

2yr
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