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2022-04-03 01:59

I have read up to chapter 44 (all of the free chapters) and this review is based off of this. Summary: The MC died and got reincarnated in a new world with nothing to help him out. His parents died early on in his life and he had to mature early to support himself and his younger sister. When he gets fired from his job as a dishwasher, his system appears. It allows him to tap his phone in exchange for pesos, using some of his stamina in return. Now for the review. There is very little world building/background so far, and I am not sure if that changes but I doubt so and I am not going to waste time and money to check it out. The MC’s past has barely been revealed, only details such as his full name, his parents’ names, and his sister’s. The MC is also very ignorant about everything in the world, knowing near nothing aside from cooking and working. The character development is especially lacking so far. The MC is extremely illogical and has not matured at all so far. He gains an appraisal skill from completing a quest and discovers that he has a soul talent. He proceeds to awaken his talent using a syringe that can quickly awaken it and decides he should also awaken his sister’s talent (he has 2 syringes). This entire process was put off for 20+ chapters when it could have been done immediately. The plot barely progressed during these chapters, only him buying a house, a car, and obtaining a coffee shop which passively makes him money. You would expect him to run the coffee shop since it is a physical location that the system somehow miraculously got, but apparently it can run idly. He also has a cheat soul talent where he can grow any plant quickly in his dimensional space but he decides to not use it, only later using it for storage. In another example, when he first unlocked the system’s shop that required golden tickets for different items (1 golden ticket = 100,000 exp), he purchased two golden tickets instead of leveling up his system which would allow him to earn money faster, again, all for the author to delay the story and barely develop the plot. I would not recommend you read the story unless you really need something to kill time, but there are numerous other novels on here that are better than this for that purpose.

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KhunMisaki
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up....most helpful review

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unlike some brain-dead reviewer, this is a real reviewer

PUERKO_Senpai
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ok

James_carl
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thanks for saving

gobmi
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I wish I read this review first. I read way too much before checking the reviews

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