

only bystanders who accidentally become binge reader, love to spew nonsenses on comment. If you don't like it, it's your problem.
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longer life span doesn't mean preserving youth
real world, not game world. beside what's the used of real world money, he still live in the slum
he should load that nuke skill
why always doton? doton is earth release
😮💨 another good story become low quality when cm get webnovel diseases. mc + cheat = idiot he's only focusing earning more money not making her girls happy.
hahahaha this kinda confusing but it definitely make me laugh
i think mc need intelligent stat more than luck stat
The story is solid, but there are too many neutral or fence-sitting comments that don’t really move the plot forward. Several plot points are stretched across two to three chapters, which feels inefficient and slows the pacing. You might consider consolidating each plot into one chapter, or at most two, while maintaining a smooth narrative flow. This would help avoid repeatedly dwelling on the same scene and keep the story more engaging and impactful.