KinghtariusWR

too much info dump and opinion of author with no direct connection to the real plot of the story. I think author should write a journal paper instead of writing a novel (story)

no progress to the story, just banter between him and ralph. author, you have talent in creating script for sitcom, why the hell are u choosing writing novel instead? and you choose action genre like marvel too, while romantic novel section much better for you to write as you love to make drama more than action. just suggestion and i think i'll drop this novel.

another webnovel syndrome, mc + cheat = idiot. author definitely just taking the words "speed is king" directly without seeing the fundamental based to make speed become king.

author is a single virgin so love is unknown zone for author to explore lol

check previous chapter

nice story, kinda fresh to read this one. just need more detail in describing the world surrounding and action also less comparisson to other thing

relax the error just change name, it will be quite handful if the error change the name kisame into kisama 🤣

If mc can take him kilometers away from the village, why can’t he just slit his throat with kunai?

why the fuck he obsessed with Dumbledore and Voldemort?

Alteady a few wish here