All in all I liked the stroy, it had a great flow and was enjoyable, However my only real complaint was with the ending. I liked the little twist with the one clone Rebelling (kind of) but something just didn't sit well with me. I think it was because it felt like something that the origanl (I cant spell lol) should of seen coming since he had all of ricks smarts it seems like it was avoidable (does this make since? I'm not good with explaining things). But like i said other then the very end I enjoyed this and i feel like there should be more stories like this (IE someone somehow gets ricks tech or knows how to make it).
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if you liked this then you'll love the sequel to this fic. it's called, In this corner of the Omniverse. I'll release it soon. it will follow mc and Ahsoka's son going on his own adventure and he will be smarter and more tech oriented. with simpler but waaay better utilized tech. i literally spent three months listing out all the clever ways to use all the tech in one giant folder. and it will be in the fic. so watch out for when I release that, sometime after July 2nd.
I'm going to start reading this fanfic already waiting for the next one
