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2022-08-08 16:02

I really like the story but I find it hard to read and just plane bad starting around the magicians arc. I REALLY hated the harem aspect and how an EXTREMELY smart super genius who is easily manipulating a lot of people at the same time finds it EXTREMELY hard to even slightly understand the thinking of his gf (the one from arifureta). I personally don't like the magicians arc but the rest was good. I also feel like his childhood dream of being a god was kinda just added in their to explain his desire for power. PS I stopped reading on chapter 307

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GoldFinger
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yh. the magicians arc got bad and out of hand. should have ended it sooner. thanks for reading. try my other fics. you might like those i also have new ones planned for later this month. check them out if you feel like it

Gulf_Alpha_Yankee
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again it was really good but it just over time get inconsistent for example the MC is a super genius who learns from almost all his mistakes pretty fast to then keep making the same mistakes over and over again

GoldFinger:yh. the magicians arc got bad and out of hand. should have ended it sooner. thanks for reading. try my other fics. you might like those i also have new ones planned for later this month. check them out if you feel like it
GoldFinger
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yh. my new MCs won't make the same mistakes twice . I'll learn from this. 😁

Gulf_Alpha_Yankee:again it was really good but it just over time get inconsistent for example the MC is a super genius who learns from almost all his mistakes pretty fast to then keep making the same mistakes over and over again
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