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Huntsman
HuntsmanLv22yr
2022-08-02 22:11

This is nice, and the Magician Arc has been awesome, though I might be biased since I loved Magician when the first season came out. The only problem is the MC's dickishness, is that a word? Meh, whatever. I just feel like there are several deaths in the series that could be avoided, and the MC's attempt at humiliating Panacea is just ridiculous. Sure, it's a response in line with his personality and actions thus far, but at the same time, Panacea wasn't obligated to help him, not to mention the possible repercurssions working on Offee's brain might as an untrained parahuman might have. It's already established in Worm that some people react poorly to brain-alteration and mind control. As for the next fic you'll write, I'm not telling you to do anything here, but I really hope it's the Magician fanfic. Jay's obssession with science makes the whole magic thing seem kinda redundant at this point, but I still think it's the best Arc. Alright, night.

In This Corner Of The Multiverse

GoldFinger
4.6
354 Chs

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GoldFinger
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thanks for telling me ☺️

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GoldFinger
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Hello Everyone. Shameless author here, posting a shameless review. This is a decent technological story, and honestly, something I haven't seen done before. A story where the main character uses mostly technology and scheming to gain power. This will be a weak to strong story with a cunning and ruthless protagonist but don't expect him to be a murderhobo. He will kill, but only if he feels it necessary. This is a more realistic take on the multiverse fics that litter this site, which are by no means bad or anything, they are actually quite good, but few ever write about tech upliftment stories so here we are. Please give the story a try, you might just like it!

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Beefnator
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There is only one word for this ... Good ...............................................................................................

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ChiefSlapaHoe
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ThIs story is awesome, im really glad you Have Heroes(Tv) In your story. There isnt alot of fic about it, you definitely deserve a 5 star rating even if i havent read it yet

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Ok so Only a couple Chappys but I'm enjoying this already. The MC is Cunning and Ruthless he's from what I'm seeing not playing Hero like a complete Moron I approve.

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The_Puffer
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Mc is just an emotional wreckage. He tries to act like he doesnt cares but deep down he is just a little kid trying to act cool. Nearly everything in starwars could be prevented only if he forced his wife to talk a little. Or Just, I dont know, font aproach an enemy without double tapping? And his future self says wanda fixed him or something. Meaning that he Will be a Lil cry baby untill the marvel universe. Spoiler but might needed to know: And I dont know how to feel about his future self doing what he did to his Girls. I mean, I would be Fine if that parts were at the end of the fic Just so it can end in a good ending but it was a mistake to put it when our perspective was younger mc. It felt like he just got c*cked

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It’s just another typical story about an unfeeling psychopath going around murdering people and stealing their powers. That’s really about it.

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Looked at the Desc and read the story. All I can say is that the author delivered and I am pleased. The grammar was good and clean and the characters and worlds are interesting and well thought out. 4.8/5

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SpoiledSecrets
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The story is ok, it’s nothing new or special. The problem I have with this is the villian tag. The MC is not a villain, a villainous protagonist is someone without morals or bottoms lines, someone without any sort of poison (children, remorse, romance). This MC is filled with poison, so yea at best a darker anti-hero.

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