Review Detail of lindre in The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima.
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I have read up to 270 chapters after putting my review here. Author has a good writing style and a stable world background. But my god is this novel so frustrating to read! It,s chapter 270 and upt to this point it has all been a big fat training arc! MC at this point 12 years old, hasnt graduated to chunin, has S rank strength, mastered 5 nature chakra by the age of 9 years old, mastered medic jutsu, is on the way to master sealing jutsu and the canon story has just now started! Such a ridiculous story development! And the MC always gets his powers handed to him on a plate, ally here & there to help him, inspirations when he needs it and no original jutsus he has created! And i stil cant figure out if the MC wants to be a hero, villain or anti-hero, his character all over the place!
The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima.
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But he is not wrong though besides the whole hero-villain part. it's only after the last 180-200 chapters does the training cools down, and the pacing is horrible. it's not all training but you could argue that up to chapters 180-200 between 60-80% was training. it's not until chapter 260 that canon finally starts, and can't really use the whole it's a slow-paced story as an excuse.
Circuit_Board:Well for starters his powers are not "handed " over to him. Neither is this a 'fat' training arc. Though I agree on the fact that the slow progression is going to be very frustrating for a new reader. Conversely it's obvious that you didn't read the book completely . No avid reader who has read near 700k words will say bs like that. "Fat" training arc . Yeah right!
Circuit_Board:nice joke . read the whole story my foot . half the things in this comment are incorrectimage
Well for starters his powers are not "handed " over to him. Neither is this a 'fat' training arc. Though I agree on the fact that the slow progression is going to be very frustrating for a new reader. Conversely it's obvious that you didn't read the book completely . No avid reader who has read near 700k words will say bs like that. "Fat" training arc . Yeah right!
lindre:I am curious, so tell me what did i say that was incorrect?
