This is a dumb take! MC wasnt strong enough to save mieko at that point and even still he tried to save her, bet u forgot that he tried it! And the only advantage he has, is knowing the future, why would he risk altering it!

Just terrible writing! Wrong grammers and sentence structure! Its as bad as MTL story. I felt like i was reading a diary book. I had no enjoyment reading this sht.

Starts off good but after like 100 chapters, the translation turns extremely trash! Unreadable! Straight up machine translation!

Nah, HxH is a bad choice! The manga isnt even finished and will likely never be, i think the mangaka will die sooner than finish his story. The world is barely explored or hasnt been introduced to us! And the manga or anime doesnt really have major following, aside from the OG fans. Shouldve stuck with the Big Three, dragon ball, pokemon or newer popular mangas! You gonna take a hit to your patreon income, buddy.

Why do u want to write another story about one piece?! Why not choose another anime or movie like naruto or MCU?

I have read that story up to chapter 70, but the story wasnt going anywhere, MCs character was very unlikeable and very weak no matter how much he trained. And the cherry on top is that the author has a tendency to always drop his projects which he has already done with this naruto story!

Dun bother with this novel! Its basically a porn story with a bit of sailing from time to time!

Well, lets start with the fact that MC got adopted rightaway by a retired shinobi with elite jounin strength, massive knowledge, political power and wealth! Then he can also access knowledge through hiruzen, who favours him heavily! He also gets to be taught by tsunade for three years outside of konoha! He then gets kakashi as his teacher instead of original story! He gets opportunities left and right shoved into his asshole, therefore he has several training arcs to get stronger! He never struggles anywhere cause u know at the end he will win and get stronger! Then he has his biggest supporter in the shadow not know yet, who started this whole ordeal by instructing him to be adopted! And theres the terrible story pacing! cant believe its been 270 chapters and the canon still hasnt started!

I am curious, so tell me what did i say that was incorrect?

I have read up to 270 chapters after putting my review here. Author has a good writing style and a stable world background. But my god is this novel so frustrating to read! It,s chapter 270 and upt to this point it has all been a big fat training arc! MC at this point 12 years old, hasnt graduated to chunin, has S rank strength, mastered 5 nature chakra by the age of 9 years old, mastered medic jutsu, is on the way to master sealing jutsu and the canon story has just now started! Such a ridiculous story development! And the MC always gets his powers handed to him on a plate, ally here & there to help him, inspirations when he needs it and no original jutsus he has created! And i stil cant figure out if the MC wants to be a hero, villain or anti-hero, his character all over the place!

I really like this authors writing style! He makes it really easy to play out the story in your mind.

Thanks for the chap! But dude ur patreon costs too much! I wanted to subscribe but 30 euros is abit much for me.

Have u not realized MCs intention not to alter the main story? Its his only advantage he has in this cruel naruto world. I like it that way atleast until he is powerful enough.

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I told this mf on patreon that his story is way too generic and similar like any other marine fanfiction. Furthermore MCs character does flipflops throughout the story. Add to that a weak MC even after the training arc and a dumb devil fruit, no wonder no one supports u on patreon any more.

Very nice ending!

As u can clearly see, since there are no more relevant characters , author doesnt know how to progress his story and thats why he doesnt update as much as in the past. You guys can expect him to drop this soon.

This fanfiction used to good but it started to drop off the hill. The first arc, which basically consisted of only training and minimal contact with characters of dragon ball, was good. But then suddenly author starts killing off all dbz characters, and now author has no characters with whom MC can interact with. Now MC is klling anything he sees left and right while powering up.

Ohh, of course the four year old wants to learn martial arts, how very perfectly normal behaviour. Lets sign him up for MMA!

I can stomach weak MC but what i will never accept is a weak mentality! Dropped cause of this reason.