Review Detail of lindre in The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima.
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I have read up to 270 chapters after putting my review here. Author has a good writing style and a stable world background. But my god is this novel so frustrating to read! It,s chapter 270 and upt to this point it has all been a big fat training arc! MC at this point 12 years old, hasnt graduated to chunin, has S rank strength, mastered 5 nature chakra by the age of 9 years old, mastered medic jutsu, is on the way to master sealing jutsu and the canon story has just now started! Such a ridiculous story development! And the MC always gets his powers handed to him on a plate, ally here & there to help him, inspirations when he needs it and no original jutsus he has created! And i stil cant figure out if the MC wants to be a hero, villain or anti-hero, his character all over the place!
The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima.
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Well, lets start with the fact that MC got adopted rightaway by a retired shinobi with elite jounin strength, massive knowledge, political power and wealth! Then he can also access knowledge through hiruzen, who favours him heavily! He also gets to be taught by tsunade for three years outside of konoha! He then gets kakashi as his teacher instead of original story! He gets opportunities left and right shoved into his asshole, therefore he has several training arcs to get stronger! He never struggles anywhere cause u know at the end he will win and get stronger! Then he has his biggest supporter in the shadow not know yet, who started this whole ordeal by instructing him to be adopted! And theres the terrible story pacing! cant believe its been 270 chapters and the canon still hasnt started!
Circuit_Board:Well for starters his powers are not "handed " over to him. Neither is this a 'fat' training arc. Though I agree on the fact that the slow progression is going to be very frustrating for a new reader. Conversely it's obvious that you didn't read the book completely . No avid reader who has read near 700k words will say bs like that. "Fat" training arc . Yeah right!
Circuit_Board:nice joke . read the whole story my foot . half the things in this comment are incorrectimage
Well for starters his powers are not "handed " over to him. Neither is this a 'fat' training arc. Though I agree on the fact that the slow progression is going to be very frustrating for a new reader. Conversely it's obvious that you didn't read the book completely . No avid reader who has read near 700k words will say bs like that. "Fat" training arc . Yeah right!
lindre:I am curious, so tell me what did i say that was incorrect?
But he is not wrong though besides the whole hero-villain part. it's only after the last 180-200 chapters does the training cools down, and the pacing is horrible. it's not all training but you could argue that up to chapters 180-200 between 60-80% was training. it's not until chapter 260 that canon finally starts, and can't really use the whole it's a slow-paced story as an excuse.
Circuit_Board:Well for starters his powers are not "handed " over to him. Neither is this a 'fat' training arc. Though I agree on the fact that the slow progression is going to be very frustrating for a new reader. Conversely it's obvious that you didn't read the book completely . No avid reader who has read near 700k words will say bs like that. "Fat" training arc . Yeah right!