I am deeply touched by your words, and it warms my heart to know that I could inspire you in any way. Your passion for writing is evident, and remember, every writer starts somewhere. To quote J.K. Tolkien, "All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given us." And as Shakespeare once said, "Our doubts are traitors, and make us lose the good we oft might win, by fearing to attempt."I am eager to read "Pokemon: The Darkest Timeline." Please continue to write, practice, and let your imagination soar. Your unique voice is what makes your work special.With gratitude and admiration,Adam

Thank You

How's the harem?It's big? if you don't mind me ask...

It isn't that big, 2 girls for now

Who is in it?

Pido mas chicas para el harem

Yellow and Green, I guess Cynthia too

Misty?

Nope, Not yet... The author separated them

Are you rewriting this book or is there some other im not seeing because it says this guy has read to 412, but I only see 22.

yes

i thought this had over 400 chapters? if You are rewriting it, what would be the difference between this and the old one? care to tell me please?

Alright, so there are a ton of differences between Pokémon: An Unexpected Journey (the first version) and Pokémon: An Unexpected Odyssey, so let me break it down for you: 1. Austin's a solo act now. In Journeys, he had travel buddies. In Odyssey, it's just him and his Pokémon. No squad, no backup—just a guy and his team figuring things out on their own. 2. More fantasy realism. This means stuff like worrying about money, how much food costs, and what it actually means to have meta-knowledge in this world. Like, if the MC takes down a Team Rocket admin, the world isn’t just gonna pretend that didn’t happen—there are consequences, media attention, and fallout. 3. Way more worldbuilding. Odyssey goes deep into lore—Pewter City is built into a mountain like Petra, Cerulean is basically Venice, and there’s actual history behind stuff like the Pokémon War. In Journeys, this kind of detail wasn’t really a focus. 4. The Pokémon League is a legit sports league. Yeah, the four-move rule is in place, but here’s the deal: Pokémon can learn EVERY MOVE they’re supposed to, but in official battles, they have to stick to four—because rules. Outside of that? Against Team Rocket, wild Pokémon, or whatever? THEY CAN USE EVERYTHING. And before you complain, just know that writing free-for-all battles in Journeys sucked because it just turned into a slugfest with no strategy. The four-move limit actually makes battles fun to write. Whether you agree or not, I hope you at least respect that this is how I want to write my story. 5. The League isn’t just a sports thing—it’s powerful. The Elite Four, ace trainers, and even parts of law enforcement and the military are connected to it. So yeah, it’s not just about gym badges and tournaments—it’s got real influence. 6. More elements from the Pokémon manga. Expect to see stuff that wasn’t in the games or anime, adding more intense vibe to things. 7. Austin catches different Pokémon. No spoilers, but don’t expect the same lineup from Journeys. So yeah, Odyssey is a much deeper, more thought-out version of the story, with more realism, more consequences, and a world that actually reacts to what happens in it. If you liked Journeys, great! But if you’re expecting it to be the same, you’re in for something very different.

ah, so can I only read Odyssey here? or is there any other platforms i can read? and are these the only chapters available yet for this version? i kinda prefer this one based in what you said. would love to send supports too if ever I possibly can!

Yeah, the current story with 40+ chapters is Pokemon Odyessy. As for support, feel free to read the story and comment any ideas and if you want to read further 20+ chapters are available on p@treon

do you plan to finish this fanfic?