Review Detail of TheSpixa in The Forgotten Wings

Here are my thoughts! The book has an interesting plot and could garner a crowd of readers with just the content. There are some issues regarding the excessive paragraphing. Usually, to cut off a paragraph is used to cut a scene or introduce a sudden action or a different topic. Furthermore, you tend to leave a run-on sentence or start a sentence without a subject. “Walking towards the wooden wardrobe.” Is an example. Unlike other languages, English is usually written as “Subject- verb- object”. However, you frequently leave out the subject. Other than that, your book would be a very marketable idea: You have little spelling or vocabulary issues and your occasional usage of sensory vocabulary improves the flow of the book. Keep writing, author! :)