Here are my thoughts! The book has an interesting plot and could garner a crowd of readers with just the content. There are some issues regarding the excessive paragraphing. Usually, to cut off a paragraph is used to cut a scene or introduce a sudden action or a different topic. Furthermore, you tend to leave a run-on sentence or start a sentence without a subject. “Walking towards the wooden wardrobe.” Is an example. Unlike other languages, English is usually written as “Subject- verb- object”. However, you frequently leave out the subject. Other than that, your book would be a very marketable idea: You have little spelling or vocabulary issues and your occasional usage of sensory vocabulary improves the flow of the book. Keep writing, author! :)

With little to no grammatical errors, this book is an enjoyable read! For those with an affinity for sci-fi or dystopian books, this is a definite read. With consistent use of imagery and descriptive writing to visualise scenes, the author is no amateur! I do get a bit confused sometimes when I’m reading (in the latest chapter; 3-0D for example) so I keep having to reread certain parts to really understand. The wittiness of the protagonist and quality of content makes it easy to relate to the characters in the story. Kudos, author! :)

Anytime, nev!

Aye, aye, aye author, slow down! Haha I was trying a speed joke. Honestly, never in my life have I seen 12 chapters updated in a week. I had to double back for a second. Even with loads of chapters written each week, the quality of the content is still as consistent! From reading, I get very much flash vibes with the protagonist’s ability. If you like one of those overpowered mc, this book is for you! I have no negative feedback, just suggestions. Maybe try an editing software, many authors here too struggle with grammatical mistakes, so maybe to ensure flawless grammar, try them! Also, the protagonist seemed a bit shallow but that may be the setbacks of every character. With that being said, this could just be my own preference to a protagonist. With an author like this, I don’t think readers would be bored lol. Great job author!

With a consistent updating schedule and production of well-written chapters, I have little feedback to say about this book. I’m not really into transmigration and can be very picky, but this book may make me consider the genre. It’s that good. It’s one of the first books I’ve added to my collection. It’s genre specifically plays well for male readers and the content too is perfect. Understanding that not everyone is monolingual, I can’t comment on the english other than to maybe consider an editing software to spot the grammatical mistakes you’ve missed. It’s nothing major, of course, it’s just to ensure flawless work. I myself too sometimes overlook mistakes so it's a great alternative to a content editor if you have none. Keep up the great work author!

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Interesting read! The book is well written with few to no grammatical mistakes; making reading smooth and enjoyable. I have almost no qualms about it. However, as an avid reader of revenge stories, I am missing the true rage from the Protagonist. I feel that if the story were to revolve around her executing revenge along with the male lead- there should be a very solid idea on why she wanted revenge. So far, all I’ve felt from her was fear and regret. Which is not a bad feeling per say, but not justifiable enough for revenge. I don’t feel betrayal, all I felt was that the villager’s actions were extreme. However, since this is only the second chapter, I can’t really say that it’s a deal breaker for the book. If there were a plot twist in later chapters or a sudden burst of anger from the protagonist, I’d say this book would be close to flawless. Just like one of the other reviewers too, chapter one( which I will comment on where I felt was a bit off) had a paragraph that threw me off. If I were to narrow down on what, I would say it is about the elder; why is he so important? Why did he ‘suddenly’ feel evil? And you referred him to as ‘the’ when the readers have yet to know the man. In all, this is a very eye catching story and plays into the idea of those typical rebirth manhwas very well. I had to really read into every sentence to spot mistakes so it just goes to show the effort and time the author put in this book. If it’s a reader’s preferred genre, this would be their perfect pick. Good job and good luck, author! :)

Ah!!! Thank you so much! I really tried to make this book enjoyable for others. Also, me too! I hate slow paced books ^_^

Thank you! I’ll try my best on this book as my others! 🥰

Thank you so much! This really touched me🥰

From reading just the first paragraph, I already understood the fate of this story. This truly is the makings of a starlike story. The english in this, vocabulary and grammar, are immaculate. I haven’t even spotted one flow-breaking mistake. This is one of the books I can give the authors any feedback to improve on. It’s close to perfect. I get JK Rowling vibes from it. Wow. I’d describe the book in just one word. Wow. Great job author, I love the writing. Don’t doubt yourself and keep pushing through. :)

Incredible! This was one of my first “pregnancy” reads. Here are some thoughts I’ve as a reader! Try using a writing and editing software as there are some grammatical errors that make the flow of the story choppy. Try to avoid usage of immediately/ suddenly. Try using connection words as your story tends to progress very fast. Your idea for the story is very solid. You understand the demand of love stories from the readers as the way you brought forth the content of the story is highly impressive. I understand that the idea of children in a romance can be a feat too difficult for others but I believe you executed the plot was perfect. The chapter updates for the story is also very consistent and frequent. Moreover, the characters are well bulit and easy to understand. I believe for every romance fanatic out there, you should definitely give this book a read.

Wow, what an amazing read! This book is truly a ‘munchable’ read. However as an avid reader, here are my opinions on it! Negative; Taking into consideration that the author is not a monolingual , I do understand certain struggles with writing in english. As a fellow non-monolingual, I too have struggled writing in english. It reflects in my vocabulary and grammar. But not to worry, author! You can always use writing and editing softwares to support your work. Certain errors in your writing would include unnecessary “!”, “immediately”, “suddenly” etc. I’d advise against the use of the last two as it makes your writing choppy >_< ! I don’t know whether this is considered feedback or just my personal taste but, to a certain extent, the characters seem a little shallow. However, taking into fact that there are only 13 chapters, that may explain their choice of characterisation. Positive; The plot is definitely an interesting one. Truly, I’ve never heard of a story centering a ‘God’ descending to humankind. Not a lot of authors can handle writing something so unprecedented and unique but this author really knows his stuff! He has brought forth an idea, blooming it into a special story. Something I bet his readers too can agree on. The author too, pays extra attention to details in his story. The transition of the pronoun change in addressing the main character, from “it” to “him”, matches the transition of the protagonist from “God” to man. Furthermore, the author understands his readers. He has promised quality weekly chapters; an example I’m sure other authors are trying to follow. At last, those were the opinions of the author's story. It was a splendid story by the author. Keep up the good work ! :))

Wow, my first 5 stars! Im not very familiar with gladiator and warlike books but! This book is seriuosly good. I really love how this book is descriptive, slow yet fast In action and hoe it keeps me guessing. With such a stable and continous updates, this book is a must read! If you like gladiator, war and action movies, this is a must read. Cheers, author! To many more chapters from you :)

Thank you so much for the continued support!

I’m not too versed in novels surrounding werewolves so please forgive me if my review doesnt sound accurate. From what i can see, reading those 60+ chapters, the story as well as the author has really progressed! I felt that the first chapter was a bit shaky in terms if grammar and word count (which is common since all authors have to start somewhere, right?) but as i continue to read, the writing quality has improved greatly. Moreso, the plot has become clearer and more understandable. This is a definite read for readers who like slowburn in this genre. Cheers, author!

Thank you maam for the nice review! 😌

Okay, i have to admit, this book is good. The english is not too choppy and incorporates many good vocabularies. The author also flexes a good command on worldbuilding. Its certainly hard to make and MC that is op without making him too mainstreamed or unlikeable but somehow this author eluded that issue easily. Cheers author, i can see talent and potential brew in you!

Wow, this book is a real drug! Initially i just came for a review but gahdamn! Its really addicting. Your world-building is really one of a kind. i can see how much thought you put in your book. I do spot some english error here and there but who doesnt make mistakes? I really hope you continue writing on like this, author! Ill look forward for more works!

The idea for this book is really fresh! Its seldom that i see authors write about virtual reality so its really something refreshing! I really like the descriptive words your book tries to incorporate but sometimes it feels unnecessary. There are also some grammatical and spelling errors here and there but nothing too major! You should really try to use an editing software so you can improve the quality of your writing! Other than that, Your writing is superb! You have a good grasp on vocabulary and the pace your book is going at is really nice! Your writing is easy to understand and your content is always fruitful. i can understand the superb amount of support this book gets. I hope your writing journey, treats you well. Good lucK!