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KingRapha
KingRaphaLv43yr
2021-12-12 10:01

Im in chapter 18 and its ok but great not that good enough though. Too much repetitive time skip training then fighting enemy rookie mistake cause hes to arrogant. The fight scenes is too bland and souless. Hes training his body then when coming to fights hes just absored the many the fights are so boring make a fight that he didnt use df to fight what to point on training haki six navy styles if ur not gonna use it. Every chapter its like 3 months later like cmon tell me what did he improve did he improve his haki or what. I cant say if the MC is strong or weak at all (maybe he strong cause of the df). Well this my opinion i dont about the others i tried understand u at first cause ur new to writing but the fights is not improving at all. Sorry bro if ur gonna mad but thats my honest opinion.

From Darkness to Admiral

pieinskie
3.6
79 Chs

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TheUltimateP1e
TheUltimateP1eLv4

Its getting way better

2yr
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Bloob
BloobLv4

It’s little details that kill this fanfic, it starts small and then you start skipping fights cause each one is just pull guy to arm and stay still, then you start skipping arcs cause the mc will reflect after a fight, choose a course of action so something doesn’t happen again and then not do it, people in the comments are making jokes that the df is consuming his memories cause by chapter 15 he isn’t any more knowledgeable about the future than a normal person

3yr

pieinskie
pieinskieAuthor

Hello everyone, author here letting you know that this is my first work and I am taking this step by step. This story will probably be on the longer side seeing as it takes a while to go from the bottom to the top in the world of one piece. Have fun with it. pieinskie

3yr
LeyMerSen
LeyMerSenLv13

At first it was good, then he started posting nonsense bruh. Ruined it. Yvfrffffftghbbbbbhhhhhgfftttgggfttgftgffftfffttgfffgffgggfggggggggggg

3yr
Yunoo_Qtt
Yunoo_QttLv1

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3yr
reqrwq2
reqrwq2Lv3

One star for thinking your reader are stupid. You are posting chapters from completely different unrelated novel randomly again and again, I think you wanted us to give you one start. So here I am fulfilling your wish.

3yr
PakMatt
PakMattLv4

u kill your own fanfic story bro. i dont know why u did it but immm sad to let it go now. gbye percy gdbye onepiece fanfiction arghhhhhhhhhhjj

3yr
asaade
asaadeLv10

aside from updating stability everything is bad, like the others say his an idiot even upto chapter 38. everytime he first fight he will become an idiot and be arrogant its like he didn't learned a thing from his past fight

3yr
ZhangYexuan
ZhangYexuanLv14

Might change depending if the One Piece FF story actually continues and not some other story preview being posted making the whole readers hate it to the bone (author..you know that's the worse type of advertising your new work, by doing a preview of it on this Fanfic...they'll only hate it more, you can let them know about it but making a chapter not related to this FF story x3...that'll make them to not reader it anymore). Anyway will take it off my library and might not see it ever again by then, unless it pops up who knows, meh.

3yr
Thissmithy_Manga
Thissmithy_MangaLv13

was really good until author decided to just abruptly use his current book to advertise his new one by putting 4 chapters of a new book with no context in the middle of this one adios.

3yr
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