KingRapha

lol so sanji is sangis Goddammit with this names changes man cant keep up with story without being confused do i need to stop reading again before u author edit eberything to make the book readable damn it. The momentum in reading cut again with this stupid mistakes sigh

shinji to sanji? one piece? 😂

jig=zigg??

zibayen is tsubone right?

Fucking hate translation works like this the man the start of the work is good good translation then after chaptee 7 its getting shittier and shittier lile wtf am i reading be consistent if u dont want people to drop the book dont drop the quality like really man fucking hate it when ur invested in reading and quality suddenly go to shit like do some proofreading pls before uploading fuck the word counts u cant ask patreon in future if ur work is so trash.

Yeah the part of the story of not using martial soul only using for face slapping ridiculous lame and stupid chinese style really breaks a story its so stupid

juzi? whos that?

plus hes protection will expired in 5 yrs and hes already in the 4 yr and he wasted 1 yr but not gerting a ring like wtf. Ur enemy is a god king and ur fucking coasting ur power u should be training and upgrading ur strength to combat tang san but is this motherfucker is coasting for a yr wtf what a great writer wow so cool and smart lol 😂😂😂

nah here we go again forced nerf like why wait a year really? only soul elder after 4 yrs of hard training just exactly the same as the other OG charac. its so boring and the concept here is so chinese doulou dalu but not using his spirit powers while fighting why bother make dd fanfic if ur gonna make another power/fight system its so dumb i hate this kind of concept why put it a fanfic like this and he has 3 weapons i can already imagine in future he will not use his spirit powers in the future it will be background shit hes only gonna use it to face slap like this kind of low quality authors man haii

to motivate you u need low stats cause everyone gives 5 stars lol