KingRapha

People read this BS hes not even strong enough to fight the his first enemies and hes already targeting another group to target him wtf is this stupid jumbled storyline he can barely train and now ur nerfing jim to much by forcing a plot. he should have 100℅ already but the forced plot ibsted of tarining his doing sonething else hes not even strong yet its so dumb and the the backgroud its sl stupid its like earth is in a city can he go to another place or go to the woods worhout cctv or something to track him lile why are the MC here are so dumb magneto and prof X are saying we nedd to help him but not doing anything the story is so full of wholes man the author dumb and everyone is racist typical chinese shit instead of getting stro ger he will get a forced plot fights to atop being OP foced nerf he has the most OP pwer to upgrade go the the woods train for a month or a year comeback for the revenge but here hes always running getti g spined so dumb i dont even know why people bother read this one im just wasting my time i though it was good at first the premise is promising but author is 12 dumb and stupid mixing everything the most fucking annoying hes not killing the people he neets to kill he only killing the unkown ones dumb and stupid fuck so annoyinf wasted my time reading yhis garbage worm

talk no jutsu bullshit. Useless chapter all for face slapped boring and childish

See half of rhe chapter is ibfo dumb about shadow clone too much explation hahahaha

1 chapter for a shadow clone plus face slapped mode typical chinese then next chapter explaining every detail about shadow clone the milking fest is to much chinese man its so dumb its not xianxia that every move need a chapter 😂😂😂

Is this an AU garp or thr author doesnt know whats the personality of garp lol 😂😂😂 atop writing if u dont even know the personaluty of garp.

Lame promising until hes fucking collecting every girl he stumble upon! why every fanfic is like this man can people make normal shit why are people are so horny for 3D stuff goddamn cant imaginr writing harem stuff lile author cant cringe writing stuff lilke that. People can go outside a talk u a real person have sex not by becoming otaku masturbating while reading stuff like this. Like im just disappointed finally found a decent work but with this dustusting harem horny stuff its make the work unbearable and cheap sigh

gayshit 😂😂😂😂😂😂

another filler arc damn so boring jump to the arrancar arc man

fuck shit sp boring! this fucking filler is in the fucking fanfic wtf dont tell all filler will also be written in fucking boring shit too many talk no jutsu fights need 4 chapters just to finish his strong but not ysing using his power just to talk no jutsu so bullshit this fucking work is so dumb

Only MC can get away with a rape without even expalinibg lol. In other novel barely touch a girl u will fight him to drath here tang hap and tang xiao did not even bother to question anything like wtf is this and then hes gonna marry her suddenly then he will be the cuplrit then lol