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2022-06-19 21:30

Didnt like it, mc is like super passive. He doesnt use his points for like years or months at a time even when he has iver 100 of them. Mc doesnt rlly have a personality and hes annoying to read about due to the passive way he presents himself. Even when hearing that the tribes nr 1 enemies or smt have returned and are attacking the tribe he doesnt do anything, its like reading about a beta MC who just gets pushed around by life and doesnt have the balls do anything about it. Even after living in the world for years he hasnt trained or even explored his system. also character interactions are minimal and lackluster at best. Frankly the worst of all the stories that this author has written that ive read. Would have been 1/5 stars if the writing quality and update speed hadnt been good

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