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LucienNg
LucienNgLv13yr
2022-02-05 10:55

A good story with potential so far. I love how the plot itself was easy to understand without affecting the other factors such as grammar, quality, and pacing. The characters are relatable, and our MC is also a very well-written character. Please continue uploading and never stop writing :).

Tale of the Unknown Daughter of the Demon King

Via_Pandalia
4.8
217 Chs

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Via_Pandalia
Via_PandaliaAuthor

Thanks for the review :D

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love_for_anime
love_for_animeLv3

I am enjoying your story I have no words to describe your story a story is good I like how you make story dark and light both in the same Time currently I am happened to which chapter 52 I will gonna continue story but I want to give you my personal review thank you author for writing this good story

2yr

Via_Pandalia
Via_PandaliaAuthor

Hi everyone! Author here! This seems to be a trend for many authors to give reviews of their own books. So first, what to expect in reading this book: Romance:Yes it has romance, but it will be going to be a slow burn and will started in later chapters. Ah definitely, no harem. Story Plot: I have the story outline laid out, however things might change depending on the flow of the story. And since most of the time after I write it and few editings, I published it on the spot, it might really be subjective to many errors. So I'm greatful if you raised questions or your opinions, please don't take it to heart if I might not answer to it all personally, but I always take the most reasonable comments to mind for consideration and improvement of the story. Oh, but if you have questions before reading the story, you can ask it here. I will try to answer it as long as it doesn't spoil anything in the story. Please just be polite in asking, since I really have a very fragile heart 😀 Tragedy: It has a lot of tragedies like a lot of character will die and more sufferings, gore 😀 so if you're not a fan of this kind of tropes, well its up to you to read it hahaha. But I warned you 😀. Writing Quality: Hmm... Well I admit th at this book can be subjective to many errors, since I will be the only one who is writing it, and editing it at the same time. But I will try my best to improve the quality and if you spotted some errors, It will be really helpful to me if you pointed it out. I will not get angry, pinky promise. Lastly about the story well to give a short peek of the story, the mc didn't start becoming strong. And she was also not the smart one first, everything that would make her stronger and smarter will be all based on her experience. She was a good person in her past life however in her next life, it will be hard for her to keep such attitude given that she is born as a demon king's daughter. And most of all, I will try my best to keep her from being a Mary Sue. There will be some cliches, but I will try my best to make the story unique.

2yr
Chrissie_Swift
Chrissie_SwiftLv13

This is an unique plot, an intriguing narrative, and I appreciate how the author chose simple words. I've read a couple of the chapters and plan to read more. I wholeheartedly urge everyone to read this book.

2yr
bellesia
bellesiaLv14

I don't typically write reviews but this story deserves it very goodㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

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Aeipathy_02
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A story that will keep you on edge wahhhh [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend]

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BrightBrain256
BrightBrain256Lv3

Though it's a few chapters. They just kept me getting excited looking forward to what was next. I really love the creativity. Waiting for more from you Mr. Author 👌 👌👌👌 keep going

3yr
RomanceFanatic028
RomanceFanatic028Lv4

Very good read, Every chapter keeps readers engage in the storyline. Your writing style is amazing that's why, i will be looking forward for upcoming chapters.

2yr
Gaburieru
GaburieruLv3

Very impressed with the authors captivating choice of words. Well done. An amazing story with an even more amazing author! Congrats on an amazing story!

2yr
Loctovia
LoctoviaLv15

It is an interesting and unique storyline here. I am reviewing after just a few chapters in but it so engaging and keeps the reader on their toes. I loved every bit of it

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