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2021-11-30 01:04

Though it's a few chapters. They just kept me getting excited looking forward to what was next. I really love the creativity. Waiting for more from you Mr. Author 👌 👌👌👌 keep going

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Thank you for the review.

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Hi everyone! Author here! This seems to be a trend for many authors to give reviews of their own books. So first, what to expect in reading this book: Romance:Yes it has romance, but it will be going to be a slow burn and will started in later chapters. Ah definitely, no harem. Story Plot: I have the story outline laid out, however things might change depending on the flow of the story. And since most of the time after I write it and few editings, I published it on the spot, it might really be subjective to many errors. So I'm greatful if you raised questions or your opinions, please don't take it to heart if I might not answer to it all personally, but I always take the most reasonable comments to mind for consideration and improvement of the story. Oh, but if you have questions before reading the story, you can ask it here. I will try to answer it as long as it doesn't spoil anything in the story. Please just be polite in asking, since I really have a very fragile heart 😀 Tragedy: It has a lot of tragedies like a lot of character will die and more sufferings, gore 😀 so if you're not a fan of this kind of tropes, well its up to you to read it hahaha. But I warned you 😀. Writing Quality: Hmm... Well I admit th at this book can be subjective to many errors, since I will be the only one who is writing it, and editing it at the same time. But I will try my best to improve the quality and if you spotted some errors, It will be really helpful to me if you pointed it out. I will not get angry, pinky promise. Lastly about the story well to give a short peek of the story, the mc didn't start becoming strong. And she was also not the smart one first, everything that would make her stronger and smarter will be all based on her experience. She was a good person in her past life however in her next life, it will be hard for her to keep such attitude given that she is born as a demon king's daughter. And most of all, I will try my best to keep her from being a Mary Sue. There will be some cliches, but I will try my best to make the story unique.

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