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DaoistAmr
DaoistAmrAuthor3yr
2021-12-06 07:26

I have no idea who the author will be but I have to say that he is a genius, the writing is entertaining and I have been hooked, I have decided to give him all my power stones from today

My unhelpful system in Naruto

DaoistAmr
4.1
210 Chs

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Wvttz
WvttzLv4

it obviously cant be you since they have a author name tag and you dont have it 🙄

3yr
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kingchad420
kingchad420Lv4

Wvttz:it obviously cant be you since they have a author name tag and you dont have it 🙄
3yr
30
Wvttz
WvttzLv4

what do you mean i just said i dont know who is the author

kingchad420:
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3yr
7
MistofOblivion
MistofOblivionLv7

🤣🤣🤣😂

3yr
4
Overkill
OverkillLv14

3yr
22
Ryuuou_29
Ryuuou_29Lv5

why is there the bleach tag?

3yr
5
DaoistAmr
DaoistAmrAuthor

ni idea

Ryuuou_29:why is there the bleach tag?
3yr
7
Aedan
AedanLv6

It has good potential But I just can't read this bs cause of the English that is all over the place. For example, the breathing method: 1st is sun-moon breating method, then it becomes yang-yin breathing method, after that it comes back to sun-moon breathing method, this happens in 4 paragraphs and this all the time... It just gets tiring to read; Another example: it's 95% English and 5% Spanish so u have to check the translator, etc. Hope someone can edit this novel properly and then post it cause I would read it Still I appreciate ur effort in this novel, and will give u 1 PS

3yr
10
Lord_Hastur
Lord_HasturLv5

harem or no Harem ??

3yr
2
DaoistAmr
DaoistAmrAuthor

mira pues

Lord_Hastur:harem or no Harem ??
3yr
2
Lord_Hastur
Lord_HasturLv5

sorry I didn't understand what you are saying ?

DaoistAmr:mira pues
3yr
1
Aedan
AedanLv6

Literal meaning is: "Then look" NO idea what he wants to say tho

Lord_Hastur:sorry I didn't understand what you are saying ?
3yr
3
DaoistAmr
DaoistAmrAuthor

léelo para descubridlo pero coméntame ¿Qué te gustaría que fuera harén o no harén?

Lord_Hastur:sorry I didn't understand what you are saying ?
3yr
1
Ryofu
RyofuLv11

To be honest, I personaly don't read if it's not clear at the start to not be disapointed down the line. I also rarely say what I want before having an answer to not try and pull the author toward any side xD.

DaoistAmr:léelo para descubridlo pero coméntame ¿Qué te gustaría que fuera harén o no harén?
2yr
2
LiYao
LiYaoLv7

please change naraku to naruko. naraku sounds like a male to me

2yr
DaoistAmr
DaoistAmrAuthor

llegas tarde. 15 años tarde

LiYao:please change naraku to naruko. naraku sounds like a male to me
2yr
1
sagepotatoOAA
sagepotatoOAALv4

I'm the "author" "reader" Ur just reader and ye bleach cus ye

DaoistAmr:ni idea
2yr
1
sagepotatoOAA
sagepotatoOAALv4

e potatoes

DaoistAmr:mira pues
2yr
1
skizrim_3
skizrim_3Lv13

is it harem? I didn it to this cause it's the latest

DaoistAmr:llegas tarde. 15 años tarde
2yr
1
DaoistAmr
DaoistAmrAuthor

es obio que si

skizrim_3:is it harem? I didn it to this cause it's the latest
2yr
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Pau_Lisbjerg
Pau_LisbjergLv11

This story can feel like an odd one, and if you are not a fan of inconsistent grammar then your probably not going to like this one. However, the author shows signs of consistent improvement as the chapters continue, and if you can forgive the sometimes weird grammar i believe you will like this story...

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Allshallbe_Bread
Allshallbe_BreadLv3

So many spelling errors, why are you calling the female characters 'he', and male characters 'she'? ...

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Reimoss
ReimossLv14

Reveal spoiler

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Danny_Butts
Danny_ButtsLv4

This . . novel. . me . . .like The mc is interesting the characters are interesting the MC is not a complete idiot and I'm very interested to see where this goes fair warning though Naruto and Sasuke are genderbend though I don't care I know some people do

3yr
WiLeYBiGhEaD
WiLeYBiGhEaDLv13

Above average but for a niche audience(8ch in so take this with a large grain of salt). It may get better later, I will try to continue. The grammer needs work, especially the order of words. The mc is very passive/submissive. He literally gets stabbed in the stomach in the second chapter(bad enough to become unconscious and not wake up for a couple days) and when confronted by by the victrm and their family he apologizes??? Even after he tries to take responsibility for it to make Ten Ten feel better when he was just jogging (only 50m cause he is super weak). He as a 5 year old Ninja struggles to run 50 meters and do 5 pushups. I get progression but this is extreme and disconnected from the original by far. Also what is up with the clothes being described as chinese?? Naruto is a japanese story. Yubeng is a bad name. Nuf said. No world development.

3yr
UNLIMITEDPOWER
UNLIMITEDPOWERLv1

I'm translating to read the story. but I notice that the character looks like an idiot. chasing someone. someone who hits his head and doesn't take him to the hospital. looks like he must have some sort of problem maybe because he ended up in a child's body so his mind kicked back his mindset like a child. except for the main character who acts like an idiot many times. History has a lot of potential.

2yr
ven_ren
ven_renLv3

i think i read this kind of story a million times before. what makes this story unique? why genderbend? why........................ ....... ...

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AStrAl_Soul
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WaterCharmer
WaterCharmerLv5

won't read till I get confirmation is Mc a man or a girl I got confuse in synopsis vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv

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