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Allshallbe_Bread
Allshallbe_BreadLv32yr
2022-05-13 19:19

So many spelling errors, why are you calling the female characters 'he', and male characters 'she'? ...

My unhelpful system in Naruto

DaoistAmr
4.1
210 Chs

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Hani_Dje
Hani_DjeLv4

True, that would be very confusing in a gender bender story like this one

2yr
Hikari_no_Yami
Hikari_no_YamiLv14

That happens often with storys translated from spanish.

2yr
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DaoistAmr
DaoistAmrAuthor

I have no idea who the author will be but I have to say that he is a genius, the writing is entertaining and I have been hooked, I have decided to give him all my power stones from today

3yr

Pau_Lisbjerg
Pau_LisbjergLv11

This story can feel like an odd one, and if you are not a fan of inconsistent grammar then your probably not going to like this one. However, the author shows signs of consistent improvement as the chapters continue, and if you can forgive the sometimes weird grammar i believe you will like this story...

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Reimoss
ReimossLv14

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Danny_Butts
Danny_ButtsLv4

This . . novel. . me . . .like The mc is interesting the characters are interesting the MC is not a complete idiot and I'm very interested to see where this goes fair warning though Naruto and Sasuke are genderbend though I don't care I know some people do

3yr
WiLeYBiGhEaD
WiLeYBiGhEaDLv13

Above average but for a niche audience(8ch in so take this with a large grain of salt). It may get better later, I will try to continue. The grammer needs work, especially the order of words. The mc is very passive/submissive. He literally gets stabbed in the stomach in the second chapter(bad enough to become unconscious and not wake up for a couple days) and when confronted by by the victrm and their family he apologizes??? Even after he tries to take responsibility for it to make Ten Ten feel better when he was just jogging (only 50m cause he is super weak). He as a 5 year old Ninja struggles to run 50 meters and do 5 pushups. I get progression but this is extreme and disconnected from the original by far. Also what is up with the clothes being described as chinese?? Naruto is a japanese story. Yubeng is a bad name. Nuf said. No world development.

3yr
UNLIMITEDPOWER
UNLIMITEDPOWERLv1

I'm translating to read the story. but I notice that the character looks like an idiot. chasing someone. someone who hits his head and doesn't take him to the hospital. looks like he must have some sort of problem maybe because he ended up in a child's body so his mind kicked back his mindset like a child. except for the main character who acts like an idiot many times. History has a lot of potential.

2yr
ven_ren
ven_renLv3

i think i read this kind of story a million times before. what makes this story unique? why genderbend? why........................ ....... ...

2yr
AStrAl_Soul
AStrAl_SoulLv4

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WaterCharmer
WaterCharmerLv5

won't read till I get confirmation is Mc a man or a girl I got confuse in synopsis vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv

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