The writing quality is pretty good in terms of grammar but the flow and pacing of the descriptions makes its feel a little boring and unnatural to read. The updates seem to be around 1 chapter every 1-5 days so definitely 5 stars there. Development was an issue for me as it felt really stale and forced honestly, along with the design and direction the characters have taken. Everything kinda just happens because it happens and makes everything really predictable and mundane. World back ground is a sticky one as the author can easily say "It's and AU." yada yada but yeah that whole spirit bending and Raava+Vaatu thing really threw me off. Choice of love interest was terrible but thats my opinion and it was put to vote so i can't complain, overall an exciting premise (Multiverse Avatar fic) but poor execution imo. And another annoying thing was the guy is called Michael in a world of South Eastern asian names, that's just me being picky though. Decent book but not 5 star worthy if i'm honest. (I got to around chapter 20, so it may improve.)
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