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2022-09-05 08:16

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Journey Home – Multiverse, starting at the Avatar TLA

Simple_Russian_Boi
4.6
62 Chs

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Venerable_Adam
Venerable_AdamLv4

bro please tell me there is harem cause a multiverse story with one girl is bad rkjevhnehuvnrfvhinvhirnnvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvnnnnnnnnnn

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spectra_phantom
spectra_phantomLv4

Can't you add azula to the harem, I know I'm late, I know, I would be happy if you put some love on azula

2yr
ShuYme
ShuYmeLv5

Kinda bad fic, seems unnecesarily angsty, and mc constantly does or has stuff happen to him which seem very forced. All the spirit stuff takes to much time especially since thats in my opinion the most boring part of the avatar world, and instead of exploring the world better mc instead gets pushed around by spirits and other such nonsense. He seems quite immature, reckless and doesnt really think about his actions. The entire fic is just rifled with plotholes and forced plot devices. Writing is okay and thats about it, got to about 30 chapters then it got to annoying to finish. Dont waste ur time on this

2yr
Pythia
PythiaLv12

The writing quality is pretty good in terms of grammar but the flow and pacing of the descriptions makes its feel a little boring and unnatural to read. The updates seem to be around 1 chapter every 1-5 days so definitely 5 stars there. Development was an issue for me as it felt really stale and forced honestly, along with the design and direction the characters have taken. Everything kinda just happens because it happens and makes everything really predictable and mundane. World back ground is a sticky one as the author can easily say "It's and AU." yada yada but yeah that whole spirit bending and Raava+Vaatu thing really threw me off. Choice of love interest was terrible but thats my opinion and it was put to vote so i can't complain, overall an exciting premise (Multiverse Avatar fic) but poor execution imo. And another annoying thing was the guy is called Michael in a world of South Eastern asian names, that's just me being picky though. Decent book but not 5 star worthy if i'm honest. (I got to around chapter 20, so it may improve.)

2yr
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Simple_Russian_Boi
Simple_Russian_BoiAuthor

I started writing this fanfic as a distraction from writers block on another fanfic of mine. Everything I wanted to say has already been written above, so just enjoy reading. I would be grateful for any constructive criticism. A Simple Russian Boi out.

3yr
Goldenswiftreader
GoldenswiftreaderLv5

Multiverse travel with a legitimate need fir the mc. Also a good reason why the pressure keeps on increasing for mc. The reason these things are important can be found when you read this story.

2yr
Reddsaint
ReddsaintLv14

Uuuuuhhhhh, YYYOOOOOO. I came over here because he stopped writing Prideful Alchemist in MHA and I was pleasantly surprised. 4.8, take my stones you talented b*stard. Updaaaaaate!

2yr
Lemman_D
Lemman_DLv14

hey chose one of the Final Fantasy games or movie as the last world it would fit perfectly 😆...............................................

2yr
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