1. Writing is fast paced, the narration is stale and boring as well. the quality of the writing is a bit worse than many trial reads. 2. Story development how should I say it? just decent. 3. Won't say anything about updating stability. for now I will give five stars. 4. World background is decent as well just not good enough for me, it is stale.

Raw?.............................................................................................................................................

Story so far is pretty meh, but the translator sucks, got to chapter where he's buying a weapon and the translator is switching freely between the word knife, sabre and longsword, like they're all the same thing, in one paragraph the same weapon was called both a knife and a longsword. If the translator is too inept at the English language that they can't get the weapons right, they have no business charging for translations, god knows what sort of other mistakes they make.

raw 功法都有熟练度 the story is not bad but get stale for me after 170 chapters. but one thing for sure if this wants to get picked, that is the translation quality has to go up. One week worth? seriously? 一周 usually mean one complete cycle in cultivation term.

I read the raws at some point a city called Sakura City appears and the protagonist compared it to "that nation" also known as Japan. He goes on to state how unrighteous they are the same drivel you see these brainwashed Chinese publish over and over again.

read 19 chapters first, I like the story it's just that there is no mention of power levels do it is somewhat confusing but overall I like it

The Story and Character are good. I haven't read any Racist remarks. The only Thing that need fixing is the editing and a bit of the Translation

The story just feels off. it feels like a three year old tried to write a cultivation novel and badly failed. The first problem with the novel wouldnbe the writing style which ruins the novel with the lack of world building and logic. we don’t have an understanding of the world’s cultivation and are just asked to understand everything about the novel without any background or context to why

looked interesting and fresh for a few chapters. but i guess a bunch of idiots spamming comments about how it didn't fit the usual troupes and them believing that is how the world should work forced the author to change the novel into a generic cultivation one.