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Black_lotus_2004
Black_lotus_2004Lv143yr
2022-01-21 20:15

1. Writing is fast paced, the narration is stale and boring as well. the quality of the writing is a bit worse than many trial reads. 2. Story development how should I say it? just decent. 3. Won't say anything about updating stability. for now I will give five stars. 4. World background is decent as well just not good enough for me, it is stale.

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Howle
HowleLv14

I think it more the translation than the writing at fault.

Morggyb
MorggybLv5

With that being said its still the best novel in this group of trials

Black_lotus_2004
Black_lotus_2004Lv14

Yea, the fact that I only bothered to read this one from the trial reads already proves that it is the best in the trial reads for me.

GrandVoid
GrandVoidLv14

And you have absolotely no right to community on the writing. I already see 2 cons about this review.

GrandVoid
GrandVoidLv14

Auto correct, *comment

GrandVoid:And you have absolotely no right to community on the writing. I already see 2 cons about this review.
Black_lotus_2004
Black_lotus_2004Lv14

Lol, I am telling commenting that the writing is fast paced so that people like me who don't like fast faced writing can know about this and prepare themselves. before reading the story. This comment would also interest those who like fast paced reading. As a reader, I have the right to comment on it that's why a writing rating exist in Webnovel right?

GrandVoid:And you have absolotely no right to community on the writing. I already see 2 cons about this review.
Black_lotus_2004
Black_lotus_2004Lv14

Not writing, its translation. Translating is also a kind of writing, so it is fast paced anyway.

GrandVoid
GrandVoidLv14

Look you can review but not lecture people around.

Black_lotus_2004:Not writing, its translation. Translating is also a kind of writing, so it is fast paced anyway.
Cash_xo
Cash_xoLv13

I want the drugs you're having

GrandVoid:Look you can review but not lecture people around.
Black_lotus_2004
Black_lotus_2004Lv14

Yeah? you're the one who was lecturing me about not commenting about something, Hypocrisy at its finest.🤐👍

GrandVoid:Look you can review but not lecture people around.
GrandVoid
GrandVoidLv14

You just dont know when to give up do you.

Black_lotus_2004:Yeah? you're the one who was lecturing me about not commenting about something, Hypocrisy at its finest.🤐👍
GrandVoid
GrandVoidLv14

And also dont act all sigma, for i am expressing a personal thought. I admit i was frusterated.

GrandVoid:You just dont know when to give up do you.
GrandVoid
GrandVoidLv14

(Its called "sus")

Cash_xo:I want the drugs you're having
Black_lotus_2004
Black_lotus_2004Lv14

Who is acting all sigma? I am just defending myself, you were frustrated and commented on me to vent you're frustration. I am not some toy of yours that you can do anything you want to and simply expect me to stay silent about it.

GrandVoid:And also dont act all sigma, for i am expressing a personal thought. I admit i was frusterated.
Howle
HowleLv14

dude that's literally what we do here in the reviews. commenting on the novel, it writing, translation, the problems we think it has, what we expect from it, how we think it could be better and all that.

GrandVoid:And you have absolotely no right to community on the writing. I already see 2 cons about this review.
Kousik_Roy_1409
Kousik_Roy_1409Lv2

When New ch will come?

Black_lotus_2004
Black_lotus_2004Lv14

This novel wasn't chosen by the translators.

Kousik_Roy_1409:When New ch will come?
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