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Rheizz
RheizzLv142yr
2022-07-14 10:57

well the plot are not bad but the author keep forgetting a lot of things. i hope author read this review and note the important part so you didn't forget a lot of the important parts.

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Marc_Moon
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It's why Im dropping the novel because there are too many inconsistencies on the info and cliche stupid characters seems to be coming out... Furthermore, the author is obviously limiting the full capacity of what the system can do and makes the MC look like an idiot who can't even fully take advantage of the system..I'm done.

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Abiskar
AbiskarLv4

i read 300 chaps so lemme give the guys who want .to read or read some chapters only & author a honest review first of all the story is good no face slapping young master can be a good read & some time it's little boring but not to a huge amount . pros- 1.no face slapping 2. no fight without reason 3.speed cultivation 4.not simp for girls( only loves 1 & want to marry her) cons- 1.to much excessive info some place & some place lack of info 2.constaly taking mc in past ,future, in some person body in place to just see thing bluhh bluhh... & excessive amout of chapter for this type of area where you'll get bored 3.i domn'tif it's a con or anything but it's kinda messed up so mc this'd MC's third life so this life & previous life had half his soul so he can't cultivate but this life & his previous life's soul fused after his previous life self died & awakened a system coz it's actually a same soul but somehow or mc planned to spread in two after 1 died it fused with other half ,the reason behind is i guess coz MC's previous previous life was .a strong person with supreme undying soul so he did it but in that life his life wasn't easy coz his parents were the strongest person on that universe (in universe there's million& billions of galaxy & in a galaxy there's billions of worlds)& his name also was Alex white but some reason at baby state he was poisoned by universes strongest posion by a super powerful enemy & his father used his cultivation & mother used half of his to suppress it but u have to know after being posioned by that posion even the universe strongest can live upto 3 day but he didn't died coz not of his parents sacrifice but bcoz he has supreme undying soul so his parents sacrifice was meaningless this type of blah blah it's kinda good but boring too that's what I felt 4.author isn't solving a single mystery but constantly putting more mystery so i felt bored 5. super fast cultivation, even you have full of treasure you need time to cultivate even if u use some universe's strongest cultivation techniques but his cultivation speed over the top & un imaginable 6. they're forcing things on mc to make the stroy more vast like if uread the frost moon emperor part it's totally meaningless to do that that doesn't even need to be done 7.same plot mc go from small to big area even if it's better place mc come to know it's the worst part of that are blahh blahh 8. constantly fortuneous encounter for no reason just forced 9.too much explanation & talk for no reason 10.new characters & their perspective seems boring ( i like side charcters perspective but here it's boring ) 11. full of unsolved mystery not a single one solved but more are being added you can read it it's good better than average xianxia just skip thos unimportant part overall good read

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