There are too many many grammar errors.I understand that english isnt author’s first language but it is what it is. Author continuously messes up cultivation levels,talent grades,ranks and levels.For example; top grade speed talent becomes low grade in another chapter. I dont understand how Author can mess these up even though he show stats twice in a chapter.(This was the biggest turn off for me.I cant stand authors forgeting mc’s upgrades than spending couple chapters to get his upgrades again .) author can not do siple math. Story,characters,diaolouge,actions are very dry almost doesnt exist at all. I hope author learn from these mistakes and grow to be a better writer. Author dont be discouraged because of what i wrote.Writing your first story can be tough but you have courage to do that and i admire you for that.

i read 300 chaps so lemme give the guys who want .to read or read some chapters only & author a honest review first of all the story is good no face slapping young master can be a good read & some time it's little boring but not to a huge amount . pros- 1.no face slapping 2. no fight without reason 3.speed cultivation 4.not simp for girls( only loves 1 & want to marry her) cons- 1.to much excessive info some place & some place lack of info 2.constaly taking mc in past ,future, in some person body in place to just see thing bluhh bluhh... & excessive amout of chapter for this type of area where you'll get bored 3.i domn'tif it's a con or anything but it's kinda messed up so mc this'd MC's third life so this life & previous life had half his soul so he can't cultivate but this life & his previous life's soul fused after his previous life self died & awakened a system coz it's actually a same soul but somehow or mc planned to spread in two after 1 died it fused with other half ,the reason behind is i guess coz MC's previous previous life was .a strong person with supreme undying soul so he did it but in that life his life wasn't easy coz his parents were the strongest person on that universe (in universe there's million& billions of galaxy & in a galaxy there's billions of worlds)& his name also was Alex white but some reason at baby state he was poisoned by universes strongest posion by a super powerful enemy & his father used his cultivation & mother used half of his to suppress it but u have to know after being posioned by that posion even the universe strongest can live upto 3 day but he didn't died coz not of his parents sacrifice but bcoz he has supreme undying soul so his parents sacrifice was meaningless this type of blah blah it's kinda good but boring too that's what I felt 4.author isn't solving a single mystery but constantly putting more mystery so i felt bored 5. super fast cultivation, even you have full of treasure you need time to cultivate even if u use some universe's strongest cultivation techniques but his cultivation speed over the top & un imaginable 6. they're forcing things on mc to make the stroy more vast like if uread the frost moon emperor part it's totally meaningless to do that that doesn't even need to be done 7.same plot mc go from small to big area even if it's better place mc come to know it's the worst part of that are blahh blahh 8. constantly fortuneous encounter for no reason just forced 9.too much explanation & talk for no reason 10.new characters & their perspective seems boring ( i like side charcters perspective but here it's boring ) 11. full of unsolved mystery not a single one solved but more are being added you can read it it's good better than average xianxia just skip thos unimportant part overall good read

Author chose to forget the present plot and did go over 10 Chapter about Mc‘s past life memories. Stupid Idiot trash Author. Why write the Novel if more then half of the Novel is about other characters and Mc‘s past

This is one of the great books I am reading right now. Most of the books I am reading are originals and I must say this book is worth of your time If you want tp read some quality. I hope Original Books will make in top list but It seems QI algorithm prevents to happen this.

Full support to Author. This is one of the gem available on webnovel. The most important thing is that this is the original novel. I hope author won't mind some people's review or harsh comment because some people just like to do that.

It’ overpowered but that’s what we are here to read so keep it up author and hope to see more and more chapters. Will get the privilege next month.

good story, but it is similar to divine replication system, how the author gives credit, but the story is nice and development is not baad, overall good book for fans who love system stories

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With no face slapping it's a great story and good background although story is progressing slow but I like it because if author is planning to do over 1k chapters then I am definitely interested because this kind of cheat system story has lot of potential to explore although not too much OP although I am quite sad about it's chapter update because it's only 300 chapters I am wondering if I should drop it for few months then read again because I am kinda impatient to read more 😅😉😉😉