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DaoistEWhaKq
DaoistEWhaKqLv33yr
2021-12-07 19:18

one of the best novels, although at the beginning the development of the MC is a bit inconsistent in the future everything fits, you only have to endure 47 chapters of little development of the MC, the only thing I can point out is that the development came very late and surely due to this the novel lost readers.

The Shinobi With The Straw Hat

LanceVance
4.1
159 Chs

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lok_98
lok_98Lv4

only 47 chapters you say?.......I don't think I have that much of patience

3yr
28
RandomSwordsThief
RandomSwordsThiefLv13

You're missing out then.

lok_98:only 47 chapters you say?.......I don't think I have that much of patience
3yr
2
DaoOfRizzness
DaoOfRizznessLv4

Is the mc op?

3yr
1
It_was_good
It_was_goodLv14

Although he becomes op but his character is made as such that it is balanced by his difficulty he faces and the loss...

DaoOfRizzness:Is the mc op?
3yr
4
JSirMixalotL
JSirMixalotLLv4

the MC loses braincells with every chapter. the forced "comedy" is the worst i have ever seen in any novel. for every good chapter there are 5 bad ones

2yr
3
Paulinaa1
Paulinaa1Lv4

Yes. :spoiler: . . . . . . . risking i see? okay. mc beat hashirama and nearly killed him in chapters 100+, madara died with ptsd.

DaoOfRizzness:Is the mc op?
2yr
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LanceVance
LanceVanceAuthor

Author here This is a shameless review of myself. As some of you may have noticed, I am not a native English speaker. I will do my best to enrich my vocabulary. My story development is going pretty well from what I see, a lot of you seem to enjoy it. The character design could sometimes be better but I will give myself five stars haha. I try to post new chapters everyday, sometimes I will post one, two or maybe three. It will happen that I don't post on some days:( As for the world background, I think that im doing a pretty nice job portraying the warring states period, what do you guys think? Anyways, I hope that you guys stick with me to follow the adventures of Kentaro. Peace:)

3yr

InfernDragon
InfernDragonLv1

At first the story does not convince me, but the more it progressed it got better, if you don't like the story at the beginning I recommend you not to leave it since it gets more interesting while you continue reading, congratulations to the author and I hope you do not leave this story . PD: sorry if it is not understood, this was translated by google.[img=update]

3yr
Thiarha
ThiarhaLv4

Let's Rank this Fanfic writing quality: 2 Stars. story development: 1 Star Character Design: 5 Stars Update Stability: 4 Stars World background: 5 Stars This fanfic contains only Cowardly and weak MCs who don't want to OP from the start with the help of System but don't have the will to be strong (weaktostrong of you don't know what i mean). MCs are only people who dare to bully the weak and are afraid of the strong. For example: MC bravely slaughtered bandits, but when he met a member of the Kaguya clan, the MC ran away. In My Opinion i Rated this Fanfic 3.4 Stars

3yr
Opudu_Miebi
Opudu_MiebiLv1

This is just terrible...addive tho but terrible. The MC just going with the flow and making stupid decisions He seriously needs to get his emotions checked cause he can kill tree random kids and just move on but one kid dies in front of him and it's the end of the world. He is annoyingly attached to even the smallest of relationships and it's annoying

3yr
Unpaid_FoxGod
Unpaid_FoxGodLv14

only one 5 star which is the world background since its a fanfic, anyways there is 0 i repeat 0! character development WHOLE STORY, be it chapter 1 to chapter 90+ his naivety NEVER CHANGES. He's like a retard who transmigrated to naruto.

3yr
Zed_5601
Zed_5601Lv1

overall its not bad but there are some points in the story that may or may not make you cringe but it really depends on who you are, the author seems cool though 😎

3yr
SwordGod007
SwordGod007Lv5

I am extremely surprised as to why the rating of this story is so high because I am in chapter 15 and MC has multiple personality disorder and the story is going haywire.... he is fearing a weak lord, fleeing from the fight, having self-doubt after a hundred of people, etc...

3yr
Binarypops
BinarypopsLv4

Only read if you’re interested in a very Very stupid mc who thinks everything should just go his way and if you’re interested in a story where canon pretty much won’t exist at all , author does have some talent for writing though so some people are bound to like the writing

3yr
hunte_pro
hunte_proLv4

my opinion on this 1) story is very fast-paced 2)it needs more detailed writing 3) needs more character (mc) development

3yr
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