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Thiarha
ThiarhaLv43yr
2021-11-29 20:54

Let's Rank this Fanfic writing quality: 2 Stars. story development: 1 Star Character Design: 5 Stars Update Stability: 4 Stars World background: 5 Stars This fanfic contains only Cowardly and weak MCs who don't want to OP from the start with the help of System but don't have the will to be strong (weaktostrong of you don't know what i mean). MCs are only people who dare to bully the weak and are afraid of the strong. For example: MC bravely slaughtered bandits, but when he met a member of the Kaguya clan, the MC ran away. In My Opinion i Rated this Fanfic 3.4 Stars

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Mr_Simping
Mr_SimpingLv14

Have you read the rest of it he changed?

Thiarha
ThiarhaLv4

yes, MC becomes OP and fights against Madara, but soon he runs away again. It's so boring to read that fanfic again

Mr_Simping:Have you read the rest of it he changed?
Mr_Simping
Mr_SimpingLv14

But what dk you expect he madara one of the strongest Naruto charcters. They mc has barelf any experince and i bascually just a rookie with good abilites and skills. He still needs the experience

Thiarha:yes, MC becomes OP and fights against Madara, but soon he runs away again. It's so boring to read that fanfic again
Thiarha
ThiarhaLv4

that's why this story is predictable. The MC doesn't have the necessary training for warfare and already arrogantly wants to be transmigrated to the war era. MC just by killing a lot of Uchiha members and allowing the rest to escape did he think no trouble would knock on his door? And also the part MC escaping from Madara and then being saved by the Kamikaze Clan Farmers is too pushy, MC Doesn't think about how his Clan Members are fighting or think about his Father. Lame and suck MC.

Mr_Simping:But what dk you expect he madara one of the strongest Naruto charcters. They mc has barelf any experince and i bascually just a rookie with good abilites and skills. He still needs the experience
Mr_Simping
Mr_SimpingLv14

I agree with you this time. But i think right now the mc is Powerful enough to handle with Ninjas on the jonnin level and some from the kage. But with the ower houses like Madara, Hurshima people like that he doesnt have enough experience also the unlimited charka saved him that time toO.

Thiarha:that's why this story is predictable. The MC doesn't have the necessary training for warfare and already arrogantly wants to be transmigrated to the war era. MC just by killing a lot of Uchiha members and allowing the rest to escape did he think no trouble would knock on his door? And also the part MC escaping from Madara and then being saved by the Kamikaze Clan Farmers is too pushy, MC Doesn't think about how his Clan Members are fighting or think about his Father. Lame and suck MC.
Mr_Simping
Mr_SimpingLv14

Hashirama

Mr_Simping:I agree with you this time. But i think right now the mc is Powerful enough to handle with Ninjas on the jonnin level and some from the kage. But with the ower houses like Madara, Hurshima people like that he doesnt have enough experience also the unlimited charka saved him that time toO.
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