Count_Daath

Loser

Megan Fox

What? Daddy issues don't equate to goth. If that was true 75% of women would be goths.

Davina if possible.

I love that Albretch's affinity with Chamon is increasing, and I think another affinity for him to gain would be with Azyr (The lore of Heavens), because shooting lighning is cool, and I think Albretch can come up with some very interesting ideas and concepts from his connection. If not Azyr, I think Ghyran (The lore of Life) would be another cool wind to gain. This would help Albretch have a by far easier time with his crops and also focus on increasing his livestock and himself. Maybe these suggestions will lead you to having Albretch eventually using both. In the end I'm really enjoying this series keep up the great work, and have a blessed day.

I'm giving this story a 1 star for a single reason. Your MC is genuinely awful to read about. In all honesty his very existence seems to make the world worse. I kinda wish that the moment he had been reborn that he would have chocked on his embryonic fuild to save the rest of the universe form having to suffer through his intolerable existence. Arthur doesn't stay true to anything he says spits upon every form of organization and always walks around as if he has the biggest stick, both in hand and in his pants, when in truth pant stick is probably micro sized and the stick in his hand would be broken by an innumerable number of people. You try to write Arthur as if he earned his power, but truthfully it honestly feels like he didn't earn anything and if he did it always comes at the expense of other people or to the plot. How is someone who was never formally trained in martial arts beating a Chi-enhaced individual who was more experience with fighting people who may have been also chi-enhaced or heavily armed. In all honesty I wished I never say the story and wasted a single second on it. I hope you lose every patron and every reader on any site your on, so one day I'll be going through a McDonald's drive through and instinctively know it you. Go put the fries in the bag, you mediocre writer.

He'll yeah. I have to say that updates are very consistent and the plot progress at the perfect pace.

Your boring person aren't you?

I think you meant to write Justin Hammer.

If Victor Von Doom can create a Utopia, so can you. All it takes is to become a Philosopher King, someone who fights for tommorow and not the present. The Ancient One is someone who lives in hypocrisy, we already know she has at least one example of 'rules you, but not for thee' with her deal with the dark dimenson for immortality. Through out the history of the Marvel Universe, it has been shown you can create a better future, but only of you act upon it. The Ancient One may be old and may spout some ideological spiel about the temple being a place of healing, doesn't mean it's true. The temple was founded from it beginning to combat forces from other dimensions. What the Ancient One should have said is that this place exists to fight enemies of humanity, not to fight the evils of humanity. This makes more sense than what crackpot shit the Ancient One spouted in this chapter.