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2021-11-20 00:20

Honestly, this story made me feel interesting with the addition of mc's background while in his new world at this time. My advice can be remembered or forgotten, it's up to you: 1. Do not rush in making a story. 2. Character development of mc and his harem is very important so as not to become like pokemon (you know this.) 3. Stability update in story. 4. Set goals from the beginning to the end of your novel because if you think about it in the middle usually the author will get caught up in imagination. Sorry if my language is confusing because I use google translate.

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J_Titan
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To be honest it was the most sincerest review i have read so far. And what you mentioned is already in my mind but problem occurs when setting up goals. I am still thinking where I should take the story or how many anime i should include. Well a turning imagination into writing is whole new deal so i will try what i can do.

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Stand_TheWorld777
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Well, I just wish you success in your book.

J_Titan:To be honest it was the most sincerest review i have read so far. And what you mentioned is already in my mind but problem occurs when setting up goals. I am still thinking where I should take the story or how many anime i should include. Well a turning imagination into writing is whole new deal so i will try what i can do.
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BLACKBULB
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I liked how the narcissistic ability make the story more amazing and funny. While the relationship between each girl was perfect and their background was also amazing though the introduction about their past was not long that was make it amazing GHAHAHAHA I don't want to read a chapters full of their past so you really are amazing author-san. I liked how the pace of the story. Writing quality was also good, I'm not good at English but I can pretty much understand eeverything. Story development, this one was amazing his narcissistic trait just make the story more amazing and it even connect beautifully to the story. Characters design - Though he didn't create the character himself, author was still amazing of bringing out the potential of each character that it blend well in the story (GAHAHAH I was just spouting nonsense about potential, it looks amazing to said so I write it GAHHAHAHH) Update Stability, This one was horrible! I just start reading just a while ago and I finished it already tsk tsk! author should upload more chapter (Sarcastic) GHAHAHHAHAHAHHHA I know that this was new so I don't really know about the update Stability GHAHHAHHA World background, at first I was not expecting a world filled with so many anime characters as in the synopsis, it only said about two anime. But surprisingly there were other characters like mifuyu from WNL, by the way she's my best heroine in the anime GHAHAHHAHA, I don't hate about other anime characters instead I loved, though they didn't get much attention early. I expect that latter chapters will fill my curiosity GHAHAHHA love ya author, update more more and more GAHHHAHAHA

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